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Author: FernWithy  (signed)
Date posted: 4/17/2001 9:01:50 PM
FernWithy's Comments:

I think that the interaction between Amidala and Anakin as they await the masquerade is terrific, and both are very much in character.

Author: Lau-ra Anu
Date posted: 4/18/2001 11:46:08 AM
Lau-ra Anu's Comments:

I absoulutly loved this story! I don't like all the stories that take them selves to seriously, and this one was great at being light hearted! I laughed so hard, I died! I can't wait for more stories like this, with none of that stuff that I don't understand. I esspesically liked the part about Obi-Wan lecturing Anakin. I could read a whole story just on that. That was the funniest part. Thank you so much for writing this story, you made my life!

Lau-ra Anu

Author: Me
Date posted: 4/20/2001 11:52:21 AM
Me's Comments:

this is a funny story!

Author: princess-sari  (signed)
Date posted: 4/20/2001 5:00:54 PM
princess-sari's Comments:

What a wonderful story! I thought the intereaction between Ani and Ami was beautiful and I like the foreshadowing with Palpy at the end. I loved it!! :)

Author: AngelQueen
Date posted: 4/21/2001 1:41:51 PM
AngelQueen's Comments:

A thoroughly wonderful story!! I totally enjoyed it! The interaction between Ani and Ami was beautiful!! The end with Palpatine sent shivers down my spine! I especially liked that last line about the first shot of galactic war being fired! A beautiful job! Keep it up! ~AngelQueen

Author: Darth Dimius
Date posted: 4/22/2001 12:25:33 PM
Darth Dimius's Comments:

I'd like to say it's afantastic book. Beswt of all in the STARWARS saga I love the storyline, where you can put all things together as every episodes (books, computer games, movies)of the story perfectly fit each other. And this story, from my point of view, is a very good part of the STARWARS univerce. And I hope it will remain so after the Episode II will come.

Author: Lille My
Date posted: 4/23/2001 6:01:33 AM
Lille My's Comments:

Funny, inventive, romantic =0) I loved it!

Author: LittleJedi
Date posted: 4/24/2001 11:43:26 PM
LittleJedi's Comments:

This was a great story. If only there were more stories like this!!


Author: Diana C
Date posted: 5/13/2001 4:21:42 AM
Diana C's Comments:

Being new the Star Wars community in general when I came across this fic I was amazed at how well you potrayaled the two, even the ending. You have a magnificent way of putting things and wordings, it's absolutely wonderful. I think i'm contradicting myself when I say I've been around, in the fic community 'i have not' for star wars. I don't know much about the books, i grew up with watching the old star wars and when the prequel first came out i was into it but honestly have only watched it once. I'm going to go out and buy it now. I'm so thrilled at how well you wrote this. This truly is 'my' favorite anakin/amidala story. i wish their were more out their like this. if you know of any please do tell. LoL.


Author: Skippy
Date posted: 5/15/2001 2:38:50 PM
Skippy's Comments:

This story was fantastic! Everyone was so completely in character. I liked how we saw Padme` open up, and show a little bit of a sense of humor to ("Why are you chasing the duck?" "I'm hungry," she replies. Priceless!). And Palpatine's lovely cameo at the end--amazing! Come up with some more ideas soon. Writing this good is hard to find.

Author: Jesse
Date posted: 6/15/2001 5:49:40 PM
Jesse's Comments:

Excellent story. You shouldv'e added more romance though. Oh well. Good work!

Author: Kat Starr
Date posted: 8/4/2001 9:49:01 PM
Kat Starr's Comments:

I love this story. Your portrayal or Anakin and Padme was excelent. The best I've seen yet. My favorite part was the costumes. They were perfect for the story. How genius of you! I hope to catch more of your work in the future. ~Kat

Author: Padawon So-Var Leet
Date posted: 8/21/2001 9:56:50 AM
Padawon So-Var Leet's Comments:

Look at what you've done! You've actually gotten me into the whole romance genre! This can't be happening ... I need to go watch something with a lot of sex, booze, and shooting really quickly.

Seriously, excellent story! Well written. I even printed it out and took it into the bathroom with me because I wanted to read it all the way until the end with not pauses.

Good work!

Author: DarthIshtar  (signed)
Date posted: 8/21/2001 10:43:03 PM
DarthIshtar's Comments:

I'm not much into mush or romance or anything girly like that usually, but I must admit to having thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Well done.

Author: Helen Vader
Date posted: 9/25/2001 12:21:31 PM
Helen Vader's Comments:

Impressive... most impressive. The best Ami/Ani fic I've read so far -- charming and witty. The dialogues are sparkling, as is the interaction between the two main characters. And despite the overall light-hearted tone, you still managed to smuggle in some hints of a much darker future -- the vision of falling that Anaking experiences in the waterfall scene, not to mention the Supreme Chancellor's appearance at the end. Brilliant!

Author: Jutitor
Date posted: 11/3/2001 6:02:04 PM
Jutitor's Comments:

Excellent story! It's very funny too!

Author: Kenobi Skywalker
Date posted: 11/8/2001 4:54:59 PM
Kenobi Skywalker's Comments:

This was a beautiful story. I like the way Anikin is portrayed. And his interaction with Padme. The everything seemed realistic except for the relationship between Skywalker and Kenobi. It just seemed a little to close. I believe that he resents him just a little more somewhere. But all in all great fic. I especially love the ending with Palpatine entering the story. Forshadowing of his victory, nicely done. It's "wizard"

Author: Quiller  (signed)
Date posted: 12/19/2001 8:12:21 AM
Quiller's Comments:

Since I generally don't *do* romance, it took me a little while to get past the title. But I'm glad I made the effort.
This was a fun read. And the scene with Palpatine was wonderful. Good job.

Author: L-Trev W. Hansen
Date posted: 12/23/2001 2:28:41 PM
L-Trev W. Hansen's Comments:

I liked the writing style in your story, but I am not much into stories that include romance for romance sake. the writing and characterization is great, and I like the scene with Palpatine at the end. A sequal (about something other than romance, maybe?)would be neat because your writing is so good.

Author: Mari
Date posted: 12/29/2001 6:37:32 PM
Mari's Comments:

Adorable. Too good for words. The characters were very believeable and the plot wonderful!

Author: DarthCookie  (signed)
Date posted: 12/31/2001 3:31:29 PM
DarthCookie's Comments:

This story was awesome! The comedy in this was extremely funny. But it wasn't so bad that it made it cheesy. Very good job!

Author: Lisa
Date posted: 12/31/2001 8:19:26 PM
Lisa's Comments:

This story was very good! The interaction between Ani and Ami was great and it had some funny parts too. I could understand how happy Ani and Ami were, and then the ending with Palpatine added a good foreshadowing tone. Through your great story, I feel true anguish that Ani and Ami will end up being split up because of the dark side! Good job, you really made me feel bad for Ani since he was such a good young man and was so happy with Amidala.

Author: Kenobi Girl  (signed)
Date posted: 6/12/2002 2:39:00 PM
Kenobi Girl's Comments:

Wonderful Story!! It was also nice to see the loving relationship between Obi-Wan and Anikin. Great explanation on the way Padme fell for Anikin and giving it more depth. Great story, you should really write more!!

Author: Alisa
Date posted: 7/26/2002 7:12:21 PM
Alisa's Comments:

WOW!!! I loved this story! i am a very picky person, not to mention a big Ami/Ani fan and your story was exactly what i wanted to read. Are you going to write any more, or is that the end????

Author: JediMaster41589
Date posted: 8/16/2002 10:44:30 PM
JediMaster41589's Comments:

Funny! I really liked how u described all the speeches that anakin had heard. I would have liked more though. Nice stroy nonetheless.

Author: Master Marla  (signed)
Date posted: 8/31/2002 10:49:52 AM
Master Marla's Comments:

It was perfect!! I loved it a whole bunch. The Palpatine scene was well put. The characters acted like they should only Obi-Wan was a little forceful lke the scene when he pulled Ani's hair. I found it a little funny but that part I think should be re-doned.

Author: falkor
Date posted: 9/18/2002 6:51:25 AM
falkor's Comments:

Oh wow!!!! this was really great!! I totally enjoyed it! and the dressing up as angels, well, somehow, it reminded me of Baz Lurhman's Romeo and Juliet, at the masquarade... beautiful!

Author: Barissa
Date posted: 10/2/2002 10:45:45 PM
Barissa's Comments:

Not bad, not that great either, but not bad

Author: JediAngel
Date posted: 10/25/2002 12:13:16 PM
JediAngel's Comments:

What an awesome story. I loved every bit of it.

Author: Ayse Naberrie
Date posted: 1/4/2003 3:26:46 PM
Ayse Naberrie's Comments:

Incredible! Add a bit of action and it couuld be Episode 1.5 !

Author: pencilnek
Date posted: 10/11/2003 12:21:55 PM
pencilnek's Comments:

Great fic! Nice job interwining humor with love and innocence. Very cute portrayal of an obsinate man and a stressed out woman. Loved how you brought in Palpatine at the end, a really nice touch!

Author: pencilnek
Date posted: 10/11/2003 12:21:57 PM
pencilnek's Comments:

Great fic! Nice job interwining humor with love and innocence. Very cute portrayal of an obsinate man and a stressed out woman. Loved how you brought in Palpatine at the end, a really nice touch!

Author: captain_oblivious13
Date posted: 12/26/2005 9:44:35 AM
captain_oblivious13's Comments:

amazing story i had first read it on months ago and ive been going insane trying to find it and when i saw it here i was positivaly extatic great story one of my favorites it is so sad in ep III when ani turns so this was a bit of a lighthearted scheme i guess

Author: Sunniva  (signed)
Date posted: 1/15/2006 7:45:39 AM
Sunniva's Comments:

I just found this on an ADVANCED SEARCH. I was looking to see if they had any Obi-Wan-Padme romance. Why is there none up here? Do I have to do everything myself? >:-( >:-( >:-(. Cool story by the way :-)

Author: saberbabe
Date posted: 2/9/2006 10:50:35 PM
saberbabe's Comments:

wOOt! great story, especially the ending. tho its rather dark and foreboding, it gave the story an edge.

Author: rainy
Date posted: 8/2/2006 3:51:42 PM
rainy's Comments:

this was great! i absolutely loved it. who ever made this will have a great future in books.

Author: sydjcmcyqp
Date posted: 8/2/2007 10:42:58 AM
sydjcmcyqp's Comments:

Gabri edit: Spam removed.

Author: Else Marie
Date posted: 5/4/2010 4:54:32 PM
Else Marie's Comments:

I know this was posted years ago, but I only just started reading Star Wars fanfiction. This was absolutely incredible to read. Everything was great, it was funny, cute and just amazing. :)

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