Date posted: 9/25/2002 12:13:10 PM
Just wow. Very well done. I liked the characterization of the Jedi and Vader as being still young and not really grasping the depth of the force. I enjoyed this one a lot.
Author: loco lucy
Date posted: 9/28/2002 10:19:50 AM
loco lucy's Comments:
nice. nice work
Author: Mcily Nochi
Date posted: 9/30/2002 1:43:24 AM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:
A very skillfully woven story, with many details that all come together in the end. It is interesting to see how different the stories of the Purges all are.
Author: Annie Grace Skydancer
Date posted: 10/2/2002 6:39:31 PM
Annie Grace Skydancer's Comments:
Great work! It leaves me wondering what's going to happen to the Jedi next?
Date posted: 10/2/2002 6:50:36 PM
Holy Cow. I thought my fanfic I'm working on was good. I suck. I am amazed. Anybody got George's number around here?? This kid needs to hook up with him!!!!! Seriously, that was friken moving. And this is doggone Star Wars!!!!! Reallllllllly Excelent. I commend you.
Author: Darth Schitzo
Date posted: 1/21/2003 8:32:59 PM
Darth Schitzo's Comments:
Dude great story, and I love the similarties between him and Obi-Wan in ANH. this is a great fan fic
Date posted: 6/18/2003 6:58:32 PM
Editor note: There's a difference between expressing dissatisfaction with a fic and flaming. Next time be more constructive with your critique.
Date posted: 7/28/2003 11:56:05 AM
This is a really strong piece; a great concept and a truely insightful approach to Jedi philosophies. I think a nice place to go with your concepts is mirroring the narrative in composition as well as content. At times the structure seemed overly fragmented for the character of Liaat Pleck'se. Nonetheless, a really promising, and thought-provoking, work.
Author: Darth Ravenous
Date posted: 4/12/2005 7:12:22 AM
Darth Ravenous's Comments:
Great Job! This was very good.