Date posted: 4/18/2001 8:31:32 PM
I read this story on the JC, but I thought I'd comment. All of Jane Jinn's stories are marvelous, and this one was no exception!
Date posted: 4/22/2001 2:44:26 AM
Hmm, 5:45 am... a good story, and a good way to ruin
your night's sleep.
Date posted: 4/25/2001 11:58:47 AM
Great one!! Jane Jinn is one of the best. well rounded story, couldn't stop...Thanks for putting it out there
Author: Liz Skywalker
Date posted: 4/30/2001 7:43:52 PM
Liz Skywalker's Comments:
very good fan fiction!!!
Date posted: 5/9/2001 7:25:04 PM
This one is great! Love it!
Author: Belle Bayard
Date posted: 5/21/2001 11:40:57 PM
Belle Bayard's Comments:
Excellent story! Truly enjoy the JA universe and Jane's continuity and voice definitely put her in competition with the professionals.
Author: Jaded Fire
Date posted: 6/14/2001 10:20:33 PM
Jaded Fire's Comments:
Excellent job! It kept my interest the whole way through. =)
Date posted: 6/19/2001 9:36:57 PM
What I thought would be a quaint read, quickly turned into a compelling one. Great characterization and a fast-moving plot made for a thoroughly enjoyable story.
Date posted: 7/8/2001 2:58:02 PM
I loved it! It was sooo funny! Best Fan Fiction I've ever read!
Date posted: 7/15/2001 10:32:15 AM
loved the story!!!
Very good interaction between Obi-Wan en Qui-gon
Date posted: 8/17/2001 11:29:13 PM
Wow! Simply marvelous! I loved it! Unique story and I couldn't stop reading! It's already 2:30 am! lol. Good job, you really are an amazing writer. :)
Author: Tess-wan tornes
Date posted: 8/28/2001 1:03:56 PM
Tess-wan tornes's Comments:
Hey I loved it. It showed the arony side of Obi-wan. it was a little long for my taste though.
Date posted: 10/22/2001 4:15:32 AM
It's a great story and i loved the parts like the stuffed wookie
Date posted: 10/28/2001 9:53:12 PM
great fic! one of the best i've ever read. wish i could write half as good.
Author: Tielana Matrix
Date posted: 11/6/2001 5:35:10 AM
Tielana Matrix's Comments:
Great story! A little long but thats OK. I just want to know one thing, why was Obi-wan wondering around in his underpants? And Qui-gon you're still a dumb-ass!
Date posted: 11/27/2001 2:48:50 PM
It was soooooo funny!!! Obi-Wan SPIT on Qui-Gon!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it! I read it on the Jedi Apprentice Arcive, but when I was surfing the stories here, I had to rate it!
Date posted: 12/22/2001 5:18:39 PM
Very VERY good! (I'd rate this as a 15, but the ratings only go up to 10)
Author: Darth Foutzious
Date posted: 3/20/2002 3:39:56 PM
Darth Foutzious's Comments:
I loved it. It's cute. The Maethums remind me of a 70s sitcom. :)
Date posted: 5/4/2002 9:03:38 AM
ok, this was an extremely well written story, and I enjoyed it.
Author: JeDi PaDmE
Date posted: 6/17/2002 8:52:32 PM
JeDi PaDmE's Comments:
The fanfic was really great! I started so early, and hear it as at 11:54PM! Obi-Wan's reaction to Qui-Gon was really amusing, during his amnesia. Cool story.
Date posted: 6/27/2002 7:39:38 AM
I loved this! It was so cool. It's one of my favorite fanfics. I loved when he got into the ice cream. :)
Date posted: 7/15/2002 10:34:59 PM
WOW! That was the best peice of fanfiction I have ever read! Seriously! I stayed up till 1:30am just to finish reading it! It was very well thought out, and I loved the scenes where Obi-Wan reverted back to being a little kid! KEEP WRITING!
Author: Nad-To Ann
Date posted: 8/3/2002 8:13:41 PM
Nad-To Ann's Comments:
Great Fic! I loved it!
Date posted: 9/21/2002 11:25:32 AM
A pretty good story I really love the amnesia twist but I did not like An-Paj having six wives him being a jedi he shouldn't have one.
Date posted: 10/18/2002 9:30:54 AM
I loved it. This was really funny
Date posted: 10/18/2002 9:30:57 AM
I loved it. This was really funny
Date posted: 10/20/2002 3:21:37 PM
Very cool, a little lengthy, but very, very, very, cool. Not too much stuff out on Obi Wan when he was younger, nice job. I enjoyed it.
Date posted: 12/5/2002 10:29:12 AM
As I'm coming originally from German and my English is not the best I refused to give a comment for any FanFiction. But now I have to say! Great story. Most impressive...
Please go on like this. I like to read more of storys like this one
Date posted: 1/18/2003 5:52:05 PM
two words awwwwww, bless
Date posted: 6/10/2003 12:41:01 AM
Great story Jane, always a pleasure to read your works. Just a bit on the long side (1030pm-340am).
Why can't Obi-Wan ever keep a girl?..Any fanfic I've ever read involving Obi-Wan with a girl, either
a. he has to leave her
b. she leaves him
c. she dies
=( Obi-Wan needs some happiness also
Author: Senator Leia
Date posted: 6/15/2003 8:20:52 PM
Senator Leia's Comments:
Awesome job Jane, it was great!!! I loved it. A little long but other than that it was perfect. Keep them coming.
Author: Vice Chancellor Griffin
Date posted: 8/15/2003 6:15:25 PM
Vice Chancellor Griffin's Comments:
Right if you beleve that someone would spend over four solid hours reading a story and then wouldent comment bout it and say how wonderful it was. Well your wrong. It was Brilliant. Now I`ve got to go to bed.
Date posted: 5/26/2004 11:42:12 PM
Very well done!! I simply could NOT stop reading! Now I have to get up in 4 hours but it was well worth it! I will look for others by you--you are a very promising fanfic author. :}
Author: Syd Bristow
Date posted: 11/6/2004 1:44:10 PM
Syd Bristow's Comments:
I LOVED this story...you added humor VERY well into the story...most humourous Star Wars stories are stupid, but this one was awesome. Good Job!
Date posted: 2/12/2005 2:04:29 AM
WOW!!! that was really really good I felt so sorry for Obi -Wan when he had to leave Rixi :( I WANT A SEQUEL!!!! maybe one where Obi -Wan meets Rixi again or somthing..... anyway a really well written story
(BTW if you write a sequel please contact me) WELL DONE!!
Date posted: 6/4/2005 5:00:51 PM
AMAZING STORY! I feel bad for Rixi tho...if you havent already, please do write a sequel, because
1) Youre an amazing writer
2) Because I want to see how the rebellion against the cat-thingys ends up....and want
Obi-Wan to meet Rixi again
Date posted: 7/4/2005 12:18:38 AM
This is the best story I've read yet! I almost died laughing. It also has great character depth for Qui Gonn and Obi One.
Author: Darth Slaya
Date posted: 8/27/2005 12:47:14 PM
Darth Slaya's Comments:
This story is one of my favorites! it is great i normaly only read stuff about Vader, Luke, Leia, and the Emporor but i saw the picture on the front read the summary and desided i HAD to read it and i am so glad i did it was SO FUNNY!!!!
Date posted: 11/2/2005 11:45:46 PM
Wow! That was an amazing story! I have school tomorrow and it's like 1 in the morning but it was worth it! I thought it'd just be short and funny, but there was a lot more to it than I thought and I liked how he got his memory back and had little flashbacks. I like the part where Qui Gon tells Obi Wan about his present from Tahl, I remember the part in JA when it first talks about that, and also the part where Obi Wan tells Qui Gon that he accepts. Also him "going out" with Rixi was cute, but it's true Obi Wan never gets girls...sad. Great story though, and very unique idea!
Date posted: 12/9/2005 2:46:07 PM
Although i have to agree with Sean...it must be hard to be a Jedi.....
Date posted: 3/4/2006 8:58:09 PM
This was definitely one of my favourite fan fics ever! Keep up the good work!
Date posted: 3/6/2006 2:54:04 PM
I loved your story!!!!!!!
How terrible Qui Gon must have felt!!!
really well written!
Date posted: 3/26/2006 5:07:44 PM
I was amazed when when I had spent 3 hours reading and I was only halfway through. It reaches almost 100 pages, making the biggest fanfic I've ever read. I loved this story, and it has to be my favorite out of every fanfic I've ever read. Awesome job, once again;)
Date posted: 10/28/2007 1:29:05 AM
I LOVED THE WOOKIE-BEAR! ;) I couldn't stop laughing about that and Mace Windu. :) You and everyone else who writes these should have all of these published!!!!! they are so good! Two questions:
1. How did they get all those Earth things, like ice-cream or bikes?
2. HOW THE HECK DID OBI-WAN END UP RUNNING AROUND IN HIS UNDERWEAR???!!!! I am totally rating this a 10.
Date posted: 11/4/2009 7:55:28 PM
This is at the bottom of the hits list ans still is one of the best, Fan fic ive had the privlege to read its shows how even ratings cant prove a wrighters skill.
Date posted: 3/14/2012 12:49:08 AM
I first read this story 7 years ago when I was fourteen. I remembered it this past week and decided I really wanted to read it since it was my favorite fanfiction ever. A lot has changed in my life in 7 years but I still look back on this story and consider it publishable material. Not because I think it should be canon, but because Jane Jinn wrote some awesome stories in the day. Are you still around Jane Jinn?
Date posted: 10/30/2012 7:49:15 PM
I loved your story!!
Date posted: 1/16/2016 2:47:22 AM
Your posting really staehgitrned me out. Thanks!