Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 11/19/2002 4:53:13 AM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

Wow. That was an extremely well thought-out piece, with enough medical background knowledge to back it up realistically. Some of the characters seemed a little extraneous, but the original characters were well developed and interesting. Great!

Author: Jenos  (signed)
Date posted: 11/25/2002 4:00:30 AM
Jenos's Comments:

Hey, nice one! That's great stuff, great medical background to back it up. Good thought-out perspective of it all...

Author: yodiss
Date posted: 11/26/2002 7:47:11 PM
yodiss's Comments:

that's great! i like it because it tackles a different field in SW--medical work. you went in-depth very well. i especially liked the ending!

Author: JediKate
Date posted: 11/27/2002 3:50:55 PM
JediKate's Comments:

The fanfic totaly rocks keep up the good work and keep more fanfiction ,like this one!

Author: Riker
Date posted: 12/1/2002 12:49:34 AM
Riker's Comments:

Good sense of pacing for the piece. As a physician myself, I found the attempt at describing the extent of injury silly. A skelton of 61% intact etc..
Good ending with him climbing off the table though.

Author: Daniel
Date posted: 12/1/2002 5:48:35 PM
Daniel's Comments:

I was good

Author: Daniel
Date posted: 12/1/2002 5:48:39 PM
Daniel's Comments:

I was good

Author: Pip
Date posted: 12/10/2002 5:10:39 PM
Pip's Comments:

nice fan fic. really captures the issue doctors have to work with. the part at the very end was good to put in there since the doctor probably got killed by his patient later

Author: Korian Jade
Date posted: 12/14/2002 6:44:07 AM
Korian Jade's Comments:

Amazing, simply amazing the dept you went into was unique and rare. I cangratdulate you on a great story.

Author: Y-Wing Ace  (signed)
Date posted: 12/21/2002 11:15:47 PM
Y-Wing Ace's Comments:

Nice touch with the doctors saying "He won't walk for months" and then him getting up and walking away. Almost expected him to wheeze out "You don't know the power of the dark side."

Author: vader
Date posted: 12/23/2002 5:53:47 PM
vader's Comments:

nice story. it would have been better if you had included the emperors thoughts on vader. i like how you explained his injuries.

Author: Nova
Date posted: 12/29/2002 11:33:41 AM
Nova's Comments:

Cool story! When I read it, and at the end when Kayel fell asleep, I thought it was poison. You sort of leave that door wide open. Interesting, and thought provoking. Very good story. Keep writing!

Author: Master Dalf
Date posted: 1/12/2003 4:37:03 PM
Master Dalf's Comments:

WOW! Great story! I am glad to see an intricate part of Vader's story that Lucas might not even include.....ever. From now on, I will reguard this as exactly what happend in the emergency room after Vaders accident.

The only thing I did not like is, I wouldn't say that the empire has that much control when Anakin is injured. It seems the rise of the empire and the end of Anakin are going to happen at the same time in episode three.
Still a good story all around, great job.

Author: DarthyVader
Date posted: 6/8/2003 1:05:43 PM
DarthyVader's Comments:

i loved it, but i did not know that there was such a thing as asthma in the galaxy!

Author: Dark Armored One
Date posted: 7/3/2003 3:49:04 PM
Dark Armored One's Comments:

This is the story that I have waited 26 years to read...How did the transformation take place? You did a great job!

I always envisioned Anakin being in a transition period. Being kept alive in the hyperbaric chamber for a while, going through rehabilitation, and getting visits from Palpatine. And during this time his hatred and evil grows to the point that he has designers create a self contained suit of life supporting body armor that will make people feel the evil he feels when they look at him.

Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 4/20/2005 5:59:43 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:

wow. that waz stunning.

MTFBWY