Author: Princess Beccerz
Date posted: 2/18/2003 7:27:16 AM
Princess Beccerz's Comments:
Oh, Angel, this is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Fantastic! I really liked Mara as you portrayed her, and I also noticed something. I thought that all Sith had red lightsabers, but Mara's blade is blue. I am taking this to mean that Mara is not all bad, and that Vader, in the midst of teaching her evil, instilled in her a greater good, the kind that Yoda would have taught her. Well done!
Date posted: 2/18/2003 2:37:54 PM
Wow, sweet fic! I love how you included Padme and Vader into this as real parents! And Mara... I had thought it was Leia at first, but to have Mara as the daughter is sweet.
Date posted: 2/18/2003 11:14:11 PM
This is the most daring Alternate Universe piece I've seen yet. And quite dark. Very well done.
Date posted: 2/19/2003 7:02:05 AM
Truely amazing! At first deciphering what was going on really pulled me into the story, but as it developed I was completely consumed!!! Definately one of the best, if not the best, fanfic ever. A must read.
Date posted: 2/19/2003 2:26:08 PM
Well, I must say that the story is the ultimate fantasy of every Mara fan: To have Luke and Leia die from the get-go, so Mara can everything to herself.
Other than that, it was well written. Good job.
Date posted: 2/19/2003 10:37:49 PM
I don't think there's an easy way to describe this fic - its simply too unique. I love how you use your words. They're not just grammatically correct, how you put them together is transformed into something wonderful.
This is a wonderful AU. Good job, and thanks for writing it. :)
Author: Aria Snowflake
Date posted: 2/20/2003 7:52:52 AM
Aria Snowflake's Comments:
This story was quite good. There was always something that bothered in the way Timothy Zahn introduced Mara Jade to Star wars. I donīt like mixing films and the Eu books together (Ok this story does it a lot).
Date posted: 2/20/2003 10:21:51 AM
I'm not too impressed. I don't mean to be critical, but I have never liked EU stuff, especially when it totally contradicts the movies, as this does. Not only that, it's basically just a rehash of the movies. You've kind of combined Luke and Leia into one character, andmoved the finale from ROTJ on the Deathstar to Coruscant.
Date posted: 2/20/2003 11:29:18 AM
Not bad, pretty weird actually, especially the Padme part. I had ramen and pbj. At least Mara jade has an origin story now...
Date posted: 2/20/2003 10:09:50 PM
just wanted to say that that was a truely awesome and unique story im a big mara jade fan and really appreciate how well you depicted her character and origins also having a different twist to it with padme and vader was interesting work definitly gave this story a 10 keep up the good work!
Date posted: 2/21/2003 6:44:49 AM
GREAT STORY!!! Wow! Lucas needs to read this one. The way that you describe the events, it's amazing! A must read! Well done.
Date posted: 2/22/2003 7:42:22 AM
Well, I do think that you just changed my mind. I really didn't have an appreciation for AU Mara stories. Heck, AU at all, but you my dear, seemed to change that real fast! Good Job, I enjoyed it.
Date posted: 2/25/2003 10:28:00 AM
*giggles* The Universe as it should be...
Loved how you took time to describe things,
but not too much time. Loved this!
Perfect reading for a Mara Jade fan!
Author: Jedi Dax Jentor
Date posted: 4/29/2003 12:37:20 PM
Jedi Dax Jentor's Comments:
Interesting. Well written. It would be cool to see more details put into this idea. I almost have to say it is too short, but that is a compliment.
Author: Grand Admiral Jello
Date posted: 7/30/2003 10:30:54 PM
Grand Admiral Jello's Comments:
Mmm, quite rewarding. I clicked the "Random fanfic link" on TFN's main page, and struck gold.
It's extremely well-written, both in content and style. It flows well and has a very rhythmic structure: which is a very good thing for a story to have.
I like how you've taken elements from the film, and weaved them into your story. It introduces a novel concept: even though this is an alternate universe, certain things are meant to be. It fulfills the mythical destiny present in Star Wars.
I'm greatly impressed, and will take a peek at any other works you have to see if they're of the same caliber.
Keep it up!
Date posted: 7/30/2003 10:45:31 PM
I don't know what to say since just about everything I would have said has already been said. I guess I can say that I really enjoyed this story, especially since I do not like Mara Jade to begin with. That has to say alot, yes?
Interesting story concept, though. It lives openings for more possible stories. I'll probably check out any others you have here or at the FF Forum.
Date posted: 10/11/2008 5:44:52 PM
MUSTAFAR not malastare