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Author: Siri Ruane
Date posted: 4/22/2003 5:54:52 AM
Siri Ruane's Comments:

How cute! I wanna marry R2 too!

Author: vampirejing  (signed)
Date posted: 4/22/2003 6:05:00 AM
vampirejing's Comments:

^___^Pooja is so cute!

What a lovely story.Good job!

Author: Princess Beccerz
Date posted: 4/22/2003 6:57:51 AM
Princess Beccerz's Comments:

Aaawwwwww! How cute! Excellent story!

Author: Princess Beccerz
Date posted: 4/22/2003 6:59:43 AM
Princess Beccerz's Comments:

OOOPS!sorry i put the wrong author! Darth Breezy, sorry about that. excellent story. sorry again!

Author: Jedisister
Date posted: 4/22/2003 8:41:25 AM
Jedisister's Comments:

That was so sweet!! Great job!

Author: Quiller  (signed)
Date posted: 4/22/2003 3:00:30 PM
Quiller's Comments:

I'm not sure I could see Anakin being quite so patient, but the story was well done. And the child, Pooja?, was nicely drawn. Good job.

Author: starzgrl
Date posted: 4/22/2003 4:44:15 PM
starzgrl's Comments:

Awww! That was soooo cute! I loved the story... great job!

Author: Jedi Master Leia Organa Solo
Date posted: 4/22/2003 5:06:31 PM
Jedi Master Leia Organa Solo's Comments:

Wonderful sweet story!

Author: Wilhelmina  (signed)
Date posted: 4/22/2003 6:59:47 PM
Wilhelmina's Comments:

I'm tickled pink to see this story here! It's nice to see adult Anakin on the light side--they can't *all* have been bad days from AOTC to Sithhood, right? ;-) Anakin's never been able to get the hang of not forming attachments, so it makes perfect sense that he'd get along so well with his niece.

Pooja is adorableness personified! Grown up for a four-year-old in some ways, but still very much a child. I could absolutely picture the young actress from the deleted scenes in this role. (Nice job on the cover art, BTW!)

Author: geo3  (signed)
Date posted: 4/22/2003 7:33:50 PM
geo3's Comments:

What a refreshing story! I agree that it cannot have been all darkness, all the time - that attachments come naturally to Anakin Skywalker and that he would indeed enjoy his niece's company.

A lovely, charming story that is a pleasure to read. I laughed out loud in a couple of places - I'll leave you to guess which! (Hint: one of them was 'arwho?' 'R2'....)

Author: Jedi Dajuan
Date posted: 4/23/2003 11:12:20 AM
Jedi Dajuan's Comments:

This is a great story. It really shows Anakin's caring side that never quite left him even in the darkest of times.
:) Jedi Dajuan

Author: jedishellyskywalker
Date posted: 4/23/2003 2:53:52 PM
jedishellyskywalker's Comments:

Ahhh, this fanfic was so sweet! The way you portrayed Pooja in the cover art reminded me of my little sister when she was little too! Jeep up the good work!

Author: jedishellyskywalker
Date posted: 4/23/2003 3:03:15 PM
jedishellyskywalker's Comments:

Shesh! I can't spell! I meant to say KEEP up the good work! I loved this story!

Author: ForceAchtungBaby
Date posted: 4/24/2003 9:46:26 AM
ForceAchtungBaby's Comments:

Breezy, dear! I've always loved this story! It so deserved to be highlighted here!

Author: Rwhen 85
Date posted: 4/24/2003 12:37:06 PM
Rwhen 85's Comments:


Author: rhonderoo
Date posted: 4/24/2003 3:21:52 PM
rhonderoo's Comments:

Great story DB!!! Like others I can see Anakin as being VERY good with children. It's good to see stories where everything is not ALL bad with him. Good job!

Author: Senator Jake
Date posted: 4/25/2003 7:47:49 PM
Senator Jake's Comments:

This was such a cute anecdote! Pooja was just great. I was also glad to see Anakin, an all-powerful Jedi, get the common cold, showing how vulnerable even the Knights of the Republic can be!

Author: Nade_Naberrie  (signed)
Date posted: 4/26/2003 6:57:57 AM
Nade_Naberrie's Comments:

Well, it's about time!!! I love the Naberrie family, (hence, my alias) especially the s! And wanting to marry Artoo, LOL! Way too cute. Loved Ani in this fic, too. What a sweetie. This is how I love to see him portrayed. AWESOME job. Keep the Naberrie fics coming! :)


Author: Nade_Naberrie  (signed)
Date posted: 4/26/2003 6:58:56 AM
Nade_Naberrie's Comments:

oops, I meant *kids*!

Author: pimpy wan
Date posted: 4/26/2003 12:09:14 PM
pimpy wan's Comments:

this was a nice short fiction. it's good to see a story which provides a glimpse into the personal lives of these characters. and the niece was very well-written also.

Author: SoloGirl
Date posted: 4/27/2003 8:22:13 AM
SoloGirl's Comments:

What a beautiful fic- you paint a perfect picture of the father Anakin could have been, and it's so sweet!! Keep up the good work, because I definitely loved this!

Author: SoloGirl
Date posted: 4/27/2003 8:22:14 AM
SoloGirl's Comments:

What a beautiful fic- you paint a perfect picture of the father Anakin could have been, and it's so sweet!! Keep up the good work, because I definitely loved this!

Author: Darth Breezy  (signed)
Date posted: 4/28/2003 10:30:09 PM
Darth Breezy's Comments:

Thank you to the people who have read, and especially to those who have left comments. It is a wonderful feeling to see and 'hear' such nice things about your work. Special thanks to the tough as Nails Betas (Geo3, Darth Lex) and the archive staff who cared enough about the story to help correct any errors they found.


Author: Valiowk
Date posted: 4/29/2003 3:08:16 AM
Valiowk's Comments:

Awww...that was such a sweet story. I like the way the focus was so throughly on Anakin and l'il Pooja, yet it was so unnoticable that I was totally immersed in the story without really paying attention to exactly who the character was (I usually don't tend to think of Anakin in this context).

Marrying R2! It's the freshest, most novel idea I've ever known :) I wonder what R2 would think :)

Author: Cat
Date posted: 5/6/2003 7:51:52 AM
Cat's Comments:

Cutest story EVER! Pooja is so sweet! And wanting to marry R2, lol!
And the ending is adorable. I wouldn't mind a cuddle with 'Uncle Ani' myself ;)

Author: JediSkywalker13
Date posted: 5/7/2003 12:26:02 PM
JediSkywalker13's Comments:

Wow this story is just plain out cute. Great job! Sibling rivils are good <Ryoo Pjooa>.

Author: Yoma
Date posted: 5/11/2003 1:17:41 PM
Yoma's Comments:

I can only agree with the rest. It's cute. Hope to get my hands on more of this. :)

Author: JediMasterMariana
Date posted: 9/10/2003 6:45:14 PM
JediMasterMariana's Comments:

I'm glad to finally read a story about Anakin being happy before he turned.

Author: DarthMaul431  (signed)
Date posted: 9/24/2003 3:04:40 PM
DarthMaul431's Comments:

I guess even in the Star Wars Galaxy, the common cold isn't curable!

Author: JediAngel
Date posted: 3/18/2004 10:03:27 AM
JediAngel's Comments:

I loved your story. It's both funny and sweet.

Author: LordObiWan89
Date posted: 4/22/2004 11:59:58 PM
LordObiWan89's Comments:

This was such a great story. The part with R2 was SO funny! LOL! Great Job!

Author: Endurwen_Kenobi  (signed)
Date posted: 7/13/2004 1:39:43 PM
Endurwen_Kenobi's Comments:

This is sooo cute! I've read this fic at least ten times and I still love it.


Author: Chelsea
Date posted: 7/19/2004 3:05:35 AM
Chelsea's Comments:

It's soo cute that I red it about a million times. keep writing thees cute stories I'm sure they'll be very good.

Author: Daniel
Date posted: 8/13/2004 6:59:03 PM
Daniel's Comments:

Vader felled by a cold, I'd never thought I'd see the day.

Author: Allie
Date posted: 3/9/2005 2:11:56 PM
Allie's Comments:

This sotry is so adorable! I love it!!!!!!!!!!

Author: JediFalcon
Date posted: 4/12/2005 4:40:19 AM
JediFalcon's Comments:

Awwwwwwwwwwwww thats so cute :x its too bad Anakin fell to the darkside and it all happened that way, because he would've made a good father thats for sure :)

Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 4/21/2005 4:35:01 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:

that is soo cute! i think that, for the first time, it would b cool if anakin didnt turn 2 the dark side


Author: TKeira_Lea  (signed)
Date posted: 10/19/2005 8:18:23 AM
TKeira_Lea's Comments:


I hit random fic and this wonderful gem came up. Sort of a blast from the past, eh? I want to marry Artoo, too. :x I just loved Pooja and sick Anakin is priceless.

Glad I got to enjoy this again.


Author: FelsGoddess
Date posted: 10/21/2005 9:14:23 AM
FelsGoddess's Comments:

Very cute. Who wouldn't want to marry R2.

Author: rocketsientist
Date posted: 1/1/2006 1:01:05 PM
rocketsientist's Comments:

This story is so sweet and poignant, I'm getting sniffly myself. Anakin is so sweet with the child - sigh - if only....
Lovely story!

Author: ShadowSpinner
Date posted: 11/12/2009 10:52:09 PM
ShadowSpinner's Comments:

Ohhh!!! this is my very favorite story i keep coming back to read it over and over!

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