Author: Darth Vegas
Date posted: 6/16/2003 10:14:20 PM
Darth Vegas's Comments:
Very good. Short and sweet, and it really shows their friendship. It begs the question, "What would it be like if they didn't have eachother?"
Date posted: 6/17/2003 8:27:26 AM
Good dialogue. It captured the character of each person in turn and made for an enjoyable read.
Author: X-wing Ace
Date posted: 6/17/2003 2:36:05 PM
X-wing Ace's Comments:
I liked it.
Date posted: 6/19/2003 11:28:35 AM
It's just me, the author...
As you can guess, I like writing about Wedge, Tycho, Wes, and Hobbie, and I like doing these missing scene things. Any ideas for others?
Author: Jedi Anakin Solo
Date posted: 7/8/2003 11:11:06 AM
Jedi Anakin Solo's Comments:
This was great. Starfighters of Adumar is my absolute favorite Star Wars book, and I love seeing a missing moment like this. The bond between those four friends is really cool, and I like seeing it in a vignette. Nice job :).
Date posted: 12/1/2003 9:13:55 PM
That was very sweet. I liked the way you captured the pilot's personalities :)
Date posted: 4/24/2007 2:27:20 PM
Love it - I'm completely addicted to the Xwing bits, and nothing makes me happier than a really well written missing scene - perfect! Well done :-)