Author: Elinon Bybeth (Author)
Date posted: 6/16/2003 8:48:45 PM
Elinon Bybeth (Author)'s Comments:
Wow! I can't believe that I'm archived! :)
Huge thanks to Cereth for the cool cover and everyone who helped beta this - you know who you are - and give special mention to Lady Padme, who helped me smooth some rough edges, Lalia Gariv, my editor-in-cheif and my brother Tim, who always knows how to make everything better.
Thanks guys! :D
Date posted: 6/17/2003 6:02:04 AM
Awwwwww this is adorable!!! How sweet...I love it!
Date posted: 6/17/2003 12:50:57 PM
Very nice, I really enjoyed it.
Date posted: 6/17/2003 7:31:49 PM
Great story Elinon! I love Skywalker heritage stories and yours is one of the best. Great OC's too!
Date posted: 6/18/2003 7:40:59 PM
Oh, that was good! It brought tears to my eyes at the end. A very clever and well written tale!
Date posted: 6/18/2003 7:42:38 PM
Forgot to mention that I love the artwork! :0)
Date posted: 6/19/2003 2:12:20 PM
OH MY GOSH!!!!!! this is SUCH a good one! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the way that Tate managed to defy orders, the way it interacted with the story, i loved it. PLEASE keep on writing stories that fit in with the movies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date posted: 6/19/2003 7:07:47 PM
Nice tie-in to the OT. Good characterization.
Date posted: 6/19/2003 9:06:39 PM
very nice story! i really enjoyed it and i liked how u included a part from the movie! nice job!
Date posted: 6/21/2003 8:05:06 PM
this is sooo good! i love stories like this, and i love how much character you put in to tate and the handmaiden. you explained so much while saying so little. rock on!
Author: Twin Suns 4
Date posted: 6/23/2003 7:39:52 PM
Twin Suns 4's Comments:
This was great. I loved it!! Write more, PLEASE!!!!!!
I loved the way you brought that scene in from the movie, considering that that scene is one of my favourite scenes in RotJ.
Thanks so much, Elinon Bybeth. You've charatised these charaters well.
Date posted: 6/25/2003 4:57:25 AM
Ah, beautiful and natural. It's fitting that Leia might learn about her heritage in such a manner.
Date posted: 6/25/2003 8:33:10 PM
It's very nice! I love it! It's good to see that Leia had known
Date posted: 6/30/2003 11:40:49 AM
Quick.... Somebody grab the tissues box !! Great tear-jerker. Expertly written. I was deeply moved.
Date posted: 7/16/2003 4:33:57 PM
Author: Mcily Nochi
Date posted: 8/8/2003 12:15:19 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:
Very moving, in a quiet, comtemplative way. This fanfic did not hit me over the head with the intended message, but communicated it subtly and with grace.
Author: Leia Naberrie
Date posted: 10/8/2003 1:44:49 AM
Leia Naberrie's Comments:
You did a good job on the two OCs. Tate's unconventionality makes sense for a Jedi who was long undercover just like Siri Tachi in the JA. And the new handmaiden was also cleverly created. The story about Leia ties in well with the OT - a very plausible 'hidden moment'. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
Date posted: 11/22/2011 5:56:07 AM
I was so confused about what to buy, but this makes it udnertsanadble.
Date posted: 1/16/2016 2:21:51 AM
Deep thinking - adds a new dimeisnon to it all.