Author: Bubba
Date posted: 6/13/2001 6:53:56 AM
Bubba's Comments:

Very comprehensive and well-done. It feels genuinely authentic, like Mr. Lucas himself wrote this sequel in his basement. The timeline at the end made my day.

Author: Darth Nor
Date posted: 7/12/2001 2:11:03 PM
Darth Nor's Comments:

Very well written story, I agree as well as it
feels like Mr. Lucas wrote himself. Brandon has
a grasp of the Star Wars universe like no other
fan fiction writter I've read yet. Well done.

Author: Belle Bayard
Date posted: 8/19/2001 2:14:55 PM
Belle Bayard's Comments:

While rather disconcerting at first to read about a Star Wars universe not peopled with familiar characters, Brendan has done an excellent job continuing the original story draft George Lucas wrote when approaching film companies with his concept. Believable and consistent, The Princess of Ondos remains a well-crafted, consistent and masterful story that could stand alone as an example to not only fanfiction but professional writers as well.

Author: Darth Unknown
Date posted: 8/30/2001 9:26:42 AM
Darth Unknown's Comments:

I thought the screenplay was very interesting.

Author: Astral Highway
Date posted: 9/3/2007 5:02:15 AM
Astral Highway's Comments:

Brilliant... i LOVED it! I have always been a big fan of the early conceptual work of the Star Wars saga... especially the development of the scripts themselves.

I have only one question:

Will you ever write 'The Legions Of Lettow'?