| Author: Mcily Nochi
 (signed)Date posted: 8/11/2003 3:25:37 PM
 Mcily Nochi's Comments:
 
This is a lovely little vignette.  Beautifully written, with good insights into Leia's mind that night.  Thank you for sharing it with us.
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| Author: Lady Moonbeam
Date posted: 8/11/2003 8:44:22 PM
 Lady Moonbeam's Comments:
 
This is a very enjoyable and sad piece--but it ended with hope, and I'm glad.  I really liked Leia's musings on how she built her mother from fragments of what she heard about her.  A very realistic portrayal.  Thank you for this lovely vignette.
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| Author: SoloGirl
Date posted: 8/12/2003 6:28:23 AM
 SoloGirl's Comments:
 
I loved this when I beta-ed it, and I love it now! Congratulations on getting it accepted!
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| Author: Tom Fitzgerald
Date posted: 8/12/2003 1:57:21 PM
 Tom Fitzgerald's Comments:
 
This made me sad, very touching.
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| Author: Jedi_michele
Date posted: 8/13/2003 9:06:18 AM
 Jedi_michele's Comments:
 
beautiful story.  sad and touching.  i truly enjoyed this piece.
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| Author: ColePierce
 (signed)Date posted: 8/17/2003 6:06:36 PM
 ColePierce's Comments:
 
This is a well-written piece.  I like the time you chose to place Leia--right after they arrive on Yavin IV, waiting for the Death Star to arrive, and for almost certain death.  It was frought with emotion; I love that!  I do question her memories of her father, though.  I always thought Obi-Wan mutilated him in a duel before Anakin had a chance to be a father to her.  In ROTJ, Leia recalls her mother, but not her father.  Here, that seems to be reversed.  Is there a reason for that?
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| Author: morwenestela
Date posted: 8/19/2003 6:29:23 AM
 morwenestela's Comments:
 
I knew you could get this story archived from the time I beta-read it for you. Well done!
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| Author: Syal
Date posted: 8/27/2003 9:48:56 AM
 Syal's Comments:
 
When she said father, I think she was referring to Organa.
 
 Handmaiden Eirtae:
 
 Well done.  I love the emotion.  You made Leia seem like a very real, very strong person.
 
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| Author: Andrew
Date posted: 6/27/2004 6:08:46 PM
 Andrew's Comments:
 
This is a Very Powerful and Emotional story i've ever read, Very,Very Good.
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