Author: Padme_Leia_Jaina14
Date posted: 7/6/2004 10:55:40 AM
Padme_Leia_Jaina14's Comments:
it was very cute! I liked the way it got into Anaikan's feelings. You really hit it right on the dot. The only thing i didn't like is it wasn't long enough. Loved it though!
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Author: Obi_Kenobi_Devotee
Date posted: 7/6/2004 9:06:35 PM
Obi_Kenobi_Devotee's Comments:
Very nice! I agree that it is very short but still a good story. You captured the moment quite nicely.
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Author: jedistar89
(signed) Date posted: 7/6/2004 10:00:01 PM
jedistar89's Comments:
Hi:) I just wanna give a big huge thanks to my beta readers for your input on my story and to GaylenKenobi for her excellent cover art.
Thanks again guys!! jedistar89.
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Author: taz
Date posted: 7/7/2004 11:15:56 AM
taz's Comments:
good story. obviously its difficult to write a great story in only 5 or 6 paragraphs, but i like the way you incorperate the lift scene in it. good job
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Author: stargirl
Date posted: 7/8/2004 2:15:07 PM
stargirl's Comments:
It was awesome to see this fic on The Force.net! I was one of the first people with the privilege of reading it months ago. Great job and congrats!
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Author: JediPug1
(signed) Date posted: 7/8/2004 7:16:08 PM
JediPug1's Comments:
I beta read this short a few months back and I'm so happy to see it archived! Congratulations!
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Author: DarthGrievous
Date posted: 7/9/2004 2:24:03 PM
DarthGrievous's Comments:
Very interesting on the insight. I really enjoyed the crispness of the feelings. Great story!
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Author: Archangel
Date posted: 7/20/2004 7:35:44 PM
Archangel's Comments:
Very cute, and the bit of Obi Wan at the end was adorable. It may have been short, but it was enough. Good job!
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Author: network blackjack
Date posted: 5/7/2005 2:52:13 PM
network blackjack's Comments:
Removed Spam.
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