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Author: Amidala_Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 12/27/2004 8:08:43 PM
Amidala_Skywalker's Comments:

Wonderful ‘fic, rhonderoo! Wonderful when I first reviewed it and still wonderful now. This is one of the best short afterlife Anakin fics I’ve ever read. I knew it was destined for archival.

Author: Ani-maniac  (signed)
Date posted: 12/27/2004 10:21:30 PM
Ani-maniac's Comments:

This was awsome!!!!! I loved it. It was well written, and very moving. You captured the feelings Anakin would have very well. I loved the idea that he played his failures back, over and over. It seems so much like Anakin. The Force was with you when you wrote this story!

Author: VaderLVR64  (signed)
Date posted: 12/28/2004 3:25:25 PM
VaderLVR64's Comments:

I loved this the very first time I read it, and I enjoyed it even more upon a second and third reading. Lovely!

Author: henry
Date posted: 12/28/2004 5:22:43 PM
henry's Comments:

so beautiful.... so lovely and heart warming. I love it how you placed it so Padme loves Ani dearly and no one else. Write more of these Anakin and Padme fanfictions!!!!!!!!!

Author: bobill
Date posted: 12/28/2004 8:45:39 PM
bobill's Comments:

Well, if first impressions mean anything, that cover just totally drew me in. Such a beautiful scene! The viggy definently lives up to it. The whole thing with Anakin's fear of entering the garden is so well-played. The scenes really add to Anakin's personality, making the fic have a really rewarding ending.

Author: Nade_Naberrie  (signed)
Date posted: 12/29/2004 4:55:58 PM
Nade_Naberrie's Comments:

Lovely viggie!

"They are as sure of the Light's love as I was of the Dark's comfort."

Ooh, that line gave me the chills, it was so wonderful! Care to share your muse with me for a while? ;) Excellent work, rhonderoo, as usual!

Author: LianaMara  (signed)
Date posted: 12/30/2004 6:50:46 PM
LianaMara's Comments:

A very lovely piece, rhonderoo - I think it gets better the more times I read it. I love how you built everything up to that final ending with Padmé in the garden - and I also love how Anakin finally found forgiveness. The cover art is beautiful, too. Great job!

Author: Dawn_Amidala
Date posted: 1/12/2005 5:13:07 PM
Dawn_Amidala's Comments:

I am so happy this made it through to be archived. I read this for you in the early stages and loved it. I am so happy for you. Love the story still. Great story!

Author: Sith in Sombrero
Date posted: 1/20/2005 9:30:37 PM
Sith in Sombrero's Comments:

Fantastic. Ilove how Anakin sees his mistakes and understands he was wrong.

Author: rhonderoo  (signed)
Date posted: 1/25/2005 7:12:31 AM
rhonderoo's Comments:

I know this is a little late, but I'd like to thank my betas, Dawn_Amidala, leia_naberrie, and geo3. You guys are the best!

Thank you for all for reading and the wonderful comments! :)

Author: Anakin Starkiller  (signed)
Date posted: 2/8/2005 10:04:39 AM
Anakin Starkiller's Comments:

I enjoyed this piece a great deal. The Redepmtion of Anakin really seems to be the theme of Return of the Jedi, now with the backstory told, and to see a redeemed Anakin somwhere other than on the ramp of a shuttle or as a ghost at the party is really nice.

These symbols weigh heavily on my mind, having lost my own father not too long ago, who I know had many regrets, and I hope in the end felt redeemed.

Author: Bant428  (signed)
Date posted: 3/15/2005 7:44:38 PM
Bant428's Comments:

"All you ever had to do was forgive yourself" -- *sigh* a wonderful universal truth.

Author: LukesTheMan1000  (signed)
Date posted: 4/8/2005 6:52:23 AM
LukesTheMan1000's Comments:

Beautiful! And a lovely commentary on forgiveness.

Author: sith_magic123
Date posted: 4/26/2005 8:36:26 PM
sith_magic123's Comments:

i'm usually just a lurker but this was so good i just had to come out and say something! It's one of the best i've ever read!

Author: Jessica
Date posted: 5/12/2005 1:44:28 PM
Jessica's Comments:

" It is time for you to come home. "

That part nearly made my eyes welled up. So sad, so sad. It is, really. I mean his fear of entering the garden really hit me and I'm sure alot of others, along with how he overthought his mistakes and his wrong-doings, but still claims that at least his family was what good he did. * sniffle * And with Padme in the garden, you can just imagine the feeling Anakin had just wishing to have her in his arms once again.

Beautifully done !

Author: ObiWanGreatestJedi2688
Date posted: 6/23/2005 12:57:34 AM
ObiWanGreatestJedi2688's Comments:

Wodnerful book really. I agree with the person who commmented right before me. The feeling he must have had when he held Padme for that time in almost 19 years. That's wonderful.

Author: bloodraven77
Date posted: 7/24/2005 2:43:32 PM
bloodraven77's Comments:

Oh this was so touching! I can't say i've read a postmortum tale about Anakin that was quite this good! I really enjoyed his reflections of the past and how in the end he realizes what he must do to move on...

Author: djFusion
Date posted: 1/16/2006 8:56:55 AM
djFusion's Comments:

This was very well written and simple to what it needed to be. I like the idea that Anakin only had to forgive himself and that he was sort of "given" the gift to find the light... which makes a hell of alot more sense than just figuring it out somehow. Nice job!

Author: jedi_knight_nikkits_sky
Date posted: 4/13/2006 1:37:40 PM
jedi_knight_nikkits_sky's Comments:

At poeace at last they are finally back together once again and peace is brought to the galaxy im so happ * tears* i love it is was perfect exacally how the movie should have ended .

Author: Exar_Kun
Date posted: 4/22/2006 2:37:59 PM
Exar_Kun's Comments:

Very good way of portraying Anakin.May the force be with you.

Author: Don Barzini
Date posted: 5/19/2006 3:12:34 AM
Don Barzini's Comments:

Just one word... awesome !

Almost drop a tear...

Author: jeremiah
Date posted: 4/14/2007 4:27:54 PM
jeremiah's Comments:

IT WOULDN'T BE TOTALLY OFFBASE TO HEAR MINISTERS REFER TO THIS STORY IN THEIR SERMONS ON FORGIVENESS IN THEIR SUNDAY WORSHIP SERVICES, AS FORGIVENESS IS THE CENTRAL THEME OF THIS TALE.


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