Author: Lady Padme  (signed)
Date posted: 2/24/2003 8:37:47 PM
Lady Padme's Comments:

Very lovely and sad. I loved Padme's line "I only wanted a family". It's so true and sums up the pathos of her tragedy so well.

Congrats for getting this in!

Author: Cosmic  (signed)
Date posted: 2/25/2003 6:27:46 AM
Cosmic's Comments:

Very nice, I liked it! Keep up the good work...
Cosmic

Author: Bobill
Date posted: 2/25/2003 4:27:58 PM
Bobill's Comments:

"I only wanted a family"
That's soooo sad! I love how you switched lost and found into found and lost, adding such a touch of grief! Her sadness is so real, so horrible!

Author: TheTrueObi-Wan
Date posted: 2/25/2003 5:15:49 PM
TheTrueObi-Wan's Comments:

Editor Note: Consider this your ONLY warning about flaming as well as using that term in a derogatory manner.

Author: Niki  (signed)
Date posted: 2/25/2003 6:12:44 PM
Niki's Comments:

Very good. Very sad. I enjoyed it. Thank you.

Author: Princess Beccerz
Date posted: 2/25/2003 7:29:29 PM
Princess Beccerz's Comments:

Good job. heep it up.

~Beccerz~

Author: Count Boobu
Date posted: 2/25/2003 11:56:36 PM
Count Boobu's Comments:

Very well made. These stories about Padme's pain of loss always keeps me speculating on just how GL is going to execute such scenes in EP3. Until then I'll have great stories like this to read. Great work!

Author: JediFalcon
Date posted: 2/26/2003 12:12:08 AM
JediFalcon's Comments:

That's very sad, poor Padme what she said was the truth. Keep it up :)

Author: Barissa
Date posted: 2/26/2003 8:10:00 AM
Barissa's Comments:

Wow, well done.

Sounds like it was maybe taken from personal expirence? Just a guess.

GL will for sure have his work cut out for him in E.3 I simply don't want to what until 2005!

~Barissa

Author: Aunecah_Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 2/26/2003 8:34:36 AM
Aunecah_Skywalker's Comments:

First, let me start by saying that I'm wonderfully delighted that this story is so well-received.

Second: Barissa - No, actually. It wasn't taken from a personal experience.

Aunecah

Author: DarraSkywalker
Date posted: 2/26/2003 8:02:34 PM
DarraSkywalker's Comments:

wow. wonderful, Aunecah.
i only wanted a family...*sniff*
;) awesome job

Author: DarraSkywalker
Date posted: 2/26/2003 8:02:42 PM
DarraSkywalker's Comments:

wow. wonderful, Aunecah.
i only wanted a family...*sniff*
;) awesome job

Author: 5m3rk
Date posted: 2/27/2003 12:26:57 AM
5m3rk's Comments:

Great story...

Author: ice angel
Date posted: 2/27/2003 2:02:57 AM
ice angel's Comments:

Editor's Edit - Watch it.

Depa Billaba

Author: Kathy
Date posted: 2/27/2003 12:50:22 PM
Kathy's Comments:

I loved the way you wrote, " I only wanted a family, She seems so sad, yet mad at the same time, wonderfully writtn, i can't wait to watch the movie,i am a fan, a huge one!!!!!!!

Author: GrungeWerX
Date posted: 2/27/2003 12:59:47 PM
GrungeWerX's Comments:

First of all, i want to thank you.I am a writer and i havent written in quite some time.This story brought back my love for writing.And the story was well-paced, organized, and filled with moments of excitement and retrospection. Great job and i would love to read more of your work.Thanks!

Author: GrungeWerX
Date posted: 2/27/2003 1:00:13 PM
GrungeWerX's Comments:

First of all, i want to thank you.I am a writer and i havent written in quite some time.This story brought back my love for writing.And the story was well-paced, organized, and filled with moments of excitement and retrospection. Great job and i would love to read more of your work.Thanks!

Author: thebl4ckd0g
Date posted: 2/27/2003 4:35:06 PM
thebl4ckd0g's Comments:

good infinities-like story. very moving in the right ways. a great read. :D

Author: Lil Thx
Date posted: 2/27/2003 6:29:11 PM
Lil Thx's Comments:

Sensational!!!!! absolutly loved it! wanted to keep reading.........

"all i wanted was a family" jedi poets at work ladies and gentleman :)

Author: JediPug1  (signed)
Date posted: 2/27/2003 8:41:14 PM
JediPug1's Comments:

I liked this very much! It was so real and so very sad, and the characters were written well. If your story is any indication, Episode III will be very heartbreaking indeed!

Author: Umich Jedi
Date posted: 2/27/2003 9:27:41 PM
Umich Jedi's Comments:

I really liked how you compared Anakin becomming a Sith apprentice to his being, once again, a slave. Strong work, very well done!

Author: Sgt J-dawg  (signed)
Date posted: 2/28/2003 7:57:27 AM
Sgt J-dawg's Comments:

I found this article truly depressing, and yet, I reflect upon this story. Made me think about things differentlly. Good job.

Sgt_J-Dawg
deployed location

Author: Jazza
Date posted: 2/28/2003 11:17:46 AM
Jazza's Comments:

Dear Aunecah,

Amazing, brilliant and fab..

Youve really captured the feeling of Episode III!

Hope George Lucas signs you up!

Well done ! :)

Author: Siri Ruane
Date posted: 2/28/2003 2:35:33 PM
Siri Ruane's Comments:

Very nice.
I, too, like that "I only wanted a family."

Author: Ani's girl  (signed)
Date posted: 2/28/2003 6:29:48 PM
Ani's girl's Comments:

This is truly an honest account of what Padme would be thinking, spending her last days with both her children. A beautiful story, told from the heart of a powerful and loved character.

Author: darthdeb
Date posted: 2/28/2003 7:19:19 PM
darthdeb's Comments:

GREAT story. It show the sadness that Padme' has for within herself and for her children. Her comment of "I only wanted a family" gets right to heart of the story. I really enjoyed this.

Author: Jason
Date posted: 2/28/2003 8:51:01 PM
Jason's Comments:

To easy of a storyline, my dear, im not sure what GL has in mind for EP.3, but i believe padmes tragic death would be a better angle of annakin's seduction to the dark side.
Perhaps her accidental death at the hands of obi-wan, or worse yet, anakin himself.
Anakins fall from the light should be more than simple influence by palpatine or loosing a near death duel to obi-wan. what better way to push annakin over the edge than loosing the only thing he loves! We all know what Anni did after the death of his mother.
I did enjoy the story, however and look forward to more of your work!

Author: Voovie1960
Date posted: 2/28/2003 9:19:36 PM
Voovie1960's Comments:

a wonderful work of fiction, even if it wasn't SW. Sad, beautifully written, I loved it.

Author: lostlove
Date posted: 3/1/2003 11:01:40 AM
lostlove's Comments:

Great story. I loved it.

Author: FeltonFreak
Date posted: 3/1/2003 6:15:15 PM
FeltonFreak's Comments:

Great story, great story. You used great descriptive words which kind of made the story have more feeling in it. I loved the story. Keep up the wonderful work

Author: Aunecah_Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 3/1/2003 6:59:44 PM
Aunecah_Skywalker's Comments:

Jason: This isn't the entire Episode III. It's the ending. Leia said that Amidala died when she was very young, so I doubt Amidala will be killed in the end of Episode III by Anakin. And I think her accidental death in Obi's hands is well off the mark. It just doesn't seem to be in-character for Obi to be so careless.

But thanks.

Aunecah

Author: ashla fardreamer
Date posted: 3/2/2003 11:01:17 PM
ashla fardreamer's Comments:

this is beautiful. truly touching and a very heartfelt look at the crucial decisions padme had to make. brilliant. also v good insight into why the twins were separated (i've been away from star wars land so i've been missing out on all this speculation.) keep up the wicked fanfics!

Author: Sierra
Date posted: 3/3/2003 4:43:21 PM
Sierra's Comments:

I like the story. It is so sad. I absolutly love the line "I only wanted a family." It is so true. Keep up the good work!!

Author: Christine McCarthy
Date posted: 3/3/2003 5:33:50 PM
Christine McCarthy's Comments:

This is a sad but great ending to the end of Anakin and the death of Padme.IT is superb!!!

Author: Ihearthayden
Date posted: 3/4/2003 9:39:01 AM
Ihearthayden's Comments:

I really loved this story. Very emotional and ties in well w/ the series. Great work

Author: its me...HI!
Date posted: 3/4/2003 7:00:46 PM
its me...HI!'s Comments:

Jasen, what DID Anakin do when his mother died in Episode II? No, just kidding =].

Author: Tanara
Date posted: 3/10/2003 10:09:29 PM
Tanara's Comments:

Woah. I think that one word sums up my feelings about this! Wonderful, heh heh... big angst fan, myself, and that was terrific!
"I only wanted a family"
Sheeze, that line was so totally cool! Ok, I'll shut up now, and stop repeating what every one else has said ;-)

Author: ice angel
Date posted: 3/16/2003 12:19:41 AM
ice angel's Comments:

Editor note:


If you don't like fanfiction, that's your prerogative, but please refrain from insulting those who do enjoy fanfiction.

Author: Cody Lover
Date posted: 3/28/2003 5:41:48 PM
Cody Lover's Comments:

Beautiful! Mr. Lucas should read this story and use some of your wonderful and touching ideas in EPIII
Thank you

Author: MonMartha
Date posted: 4/20/2003 9:12:52 PM
MonMartha's Comments:

Hey, the best lit is precise in vocabulary, concise in structure, dn conveys what is human and real.

*Ahem* Bail Organa is married when he assumes his Senate seat. If Lady Organa was a handmaiden of a certain former Queen, Palpy is too power-mad to notice that. Nice touch. :)

The calm, controlled strength, dry wit and direct manner of a certain Knight is spot-on. And appreciated. :)

Author: benskycrawler
Date posted: 6/17/2003 8:35:18 AM
benskycrawler's Comments:

I've been reading theforce.net's fanfics for a while, and this is quite possibly the best take on Luke and Leia's seperation I've ever read. It paints a very touching mental picture.

Author: jade_eyes
Date posted: 11/5/2004 1:23:08 PM
jade_eyes's Comments:

Wow! That was a great debut fic! I agree with all the other comments about Anakin's becoming enslaved again, and the line about only wanting a family--that one will be hard to top! :-,

Author: RaeAnne  (signed)
Date posted: 4/19/2005 12:49:22 AM
RaeAnne's Comments:

Lovely story, very sad, but very beautiful all the same.
---(-@

Author: wover30  (signed)
Date posted: 3/3/2008 9:16:32 AM
wover30's Comments:

This story really shows how tragic her situation is. Dare I say, tear in me eyes. Good job.

Wover