Author: Lord Bane Kronos
Date posted: 6/16/2003 11:29:22 PM
Lord Bane Kronos's Comments:

Good work I could allmost see this as a missing scene from ep2

Author: Anilu
Date posted: 6/17/2003 1:55:52 PM
Anilu's Comments:

Your fanfiction is a great fanficiton, I love it, good job, very cute;)

Author: monmothma
Date posted: 6/17/2003 2:28:23 PM
monmothma's Comments:

Beautiful! I can definitely see this happening. I love the line about how now Anakin can sleep. Very nice.

Author: NabooJedi12
Date posted: 6/17/2003 6:07:14 PM
NabooJedi12's Comments:

I really enjoyed this. This should definitly have been in the movie.

Author: rhonderoo  (signed)
Date posted: 6/17/2003 7:22:59 PM
rhonderoo's Comments:

Great story! It could very well be a scene in the movie!

Author: David
Date posted: 6/17/2003 10:34:39 PM
David's Comments:

Excellent story!!! I could visualize everything in it as if it actually happened in the movie. I've read a lot of Star Wars books "expanded universe" and your writing is right up there with all of it. It's a shame that the screenwriters for Episode 2 didn't put that scene in because I think it would have been very benificial. Well, once again supurb work, I doubt anyone can top what you wrote. Good luck, hope a publisher sees your short story and hires you.

Author: Don
Date posted: 6/18/2003 6:19:24 AM
Don's Comments:

Excellent job! GL should have asked you to co-write the Eps.3 story.

Author: DarthVenjur
Date posted: 6/18/2003 6:49:44 AM
DarthVenjur's Comments:

A wonderful delving into the depth's of Padme's inner turmoil of Episode II! I agree that this should've been a cut scene. Any chance we'll see more of your work? :)

Author: Destiny  (signed)
Date posted: 6/18/2003 12:24:29 PM
Destiny's Comments:

I'm glad to see this up, Lyra! It was very enjoyable - I loved the way you portrayed Anakin. You captured all of his passion and hesitation effortlessly.

And your cover art was beautiful. :)

Author: JediPug1  (signed)
Date posted: 6/18/2003 7:32:31 PM
JediPug1's Comments:

Great story! It fits in so well with the mood of Episode II, and your characterizations are done well.

Author: Leah Bee
Date posted: 6/19/2003 10:13:00 AM
Leah Bee's Comments:

what a wonderful little story! this could have easily been slipped into episode 2. :) fabulous!

Author: DarthyVader
Date posted: 6/19/2003 2:04:21 PM
DarthyVader's Comments:

that was pretty good, but as for fitting in with the actual story, it definitly does not fit! (no offence)

Author: jedi_michele
Date posted: 6/19/2003 9:17:24 PM
jedi_michele's Comments:

very good piece! this could so be a missing scene from ep. 2. u have a nice writing style. continue to write!

Author: Liz
Date posted: 6/21/2003 3:30:27 PM
Liz's Comments:

Wow!! Great story! Really could b a part of Episode 2, very creative - AWESOME!!

Author: TimmyP
Date posted: 6/23/2003 9:49:44 AM
TimmyP's Comments:

Surely if Ani shared a bed with Padme that would be a reason for him not to sleep ! If you get my drift ! lol

brill story I am currently writing my own story ! It is set after the end of the clone war and before ANH ! there are few Jedi and two brothers fall in love with a General's daughter. One jumps straight in and the girl doesn't want to hurt his feeling so she goes out with him, even though she loves the other brother ! The brother going out with the girl finds out that she has been captured by the sith and he goes to look for her with his bro, he ends up dying because he wanted to kill the sith lord so bad, but the other, older more experienced bro stays calm even though he is in pain, and eventually kills the sith lord and saves the day ! but then Ani kills him and most of the other Jedi !

Author: wren  (signed)
Date posted: 6/23/2003 2:36:03 PM
wren's Comments:

this is a beautiful piece! well written, too!

Author: wren  (signed)
Date posted: 6/23/2003 2:36:12 PM
wren's Comments:

this is a beautiful piece! well written, too!

Author: Gina  (signed)
Date posted: 6/25/2003 9:29:46 AM
Gina's Comments:

Tender, beautifully written piece. Really shows the vulnerable side of both characters.

Author: Mara Jade
Date posted: 6/29/2003 11:38:46 AM
Mara Jade's Comments:

This is the best Iknow of fanfiction on ani and ami thank you

Author: Senator Leia
Date posted: 6/30/2003 4:59:54 PM
Senator Leia's Comments:

goodjob this could should have been in the movie. keep writting more stories.

Author: Haydenlova419
Date posted: 7/2/2003 12:11:47 PM
Haydenlova419's Comments:

I loved it ...this part should be in the movie forreal!!!!!!great job!!!!!!

Author: Blazer  (signed)
Date posted: 7/3/2003 1:58:17 AM
Blazer's Comments:

Very beautiful and fit in well with the Padme George Lucas crafted in the movie. Very believeable and very nicely written. Good job!

-KrystalBlaze

Author: Princess1
Date posted: 7/3/2003 8:28:42 PM
Princess1's Comments:

Beautiful, absolutly beautiful. You rendered both of the characters so well, Anakin's pain, and the way he was at last able to sleep when in her prescence. This could have been SHOULD have been a scene in Episode II !

Author: Ani'sFallenAngel
Date posted: 7/5/2003 7:24:11 PM
Ani'sFallenAngel's Comments:

i remember beta-ing this a while ago; good job!! i knew this fic would get here! ;)

Author: Aeryn  (signed)
Date posted: 8/23/2003 8:56:54 PM
Aeryn's Comments:

I do think it was the confession scene that was the turning point for Padmé in regards to her feelings for him - this story deals with that marvelously. He's the broken person, she realizes she's the one who wants to fix him, and *that's* what matters. And that simply *being* in one another's presence is enough to soothe their pain - great touch, very in character for their relationship. Beautiful work. :)

Author: JediMasterMariana
Date posted: 9/10/2003 11:08:00 AM
JediMasterMariana's Comments:

Great!Excellent!I Definetly could have been a missing scene in Episode II.

Author: Archangel
Date posted: 10/4/2003 5:53:49 PM
Archangel's Comments:

Waaaaaaahhhh......
*sobs a few times*
Wow. That was incredible. I love the way you portray Padme. Simply wonderful. Keep it up.

Author: Senator Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 10/6/2003 12:44:33 AM
Senator Skywalker's Comments:

This is one of the BEST I have read!!
After seeing the movie I always wondered what happened between those scenes and this was a lovely insight, showing both Anakin's feelings and how Padme's begin to change--truly amazing!!
Your ending was perfect, PLEASE write more...

Author: anakin solo2
Date posted: 10/18/2003 7:34:12 PM
anakin solo2's Comments:

wow!

Author: Lady Solo
Date posted: 11/14/2003 11:18:08 AM
Lady Solo's Comments:

wow!

I loved it... one problem (it's not a bad one either)

I was kinda thinking that Padme and Ani's promise about falling in love would break right when he sleeps in her bed..huh..well theres always next time.
good job I like how you explained both of them too!

Author: Bandgeek
Date posted: 10/5/2004 12:42:36 PM
Bandgeek's Comments:

This was a beautiful piece of work. I would have loved to see it in Episode II but I don't think it would have been what George was going for, she did confess her love to him only when she thought they were dying, kind of like a crescendo that increases right at the end(what my band teacher tells me gain volume, in the case of the movie, real love between Anakin and Amidala at the end) Even though I still loved this piece as you wrote the characters exactly on point and even if you hadn't seen the movie you could probably still understand why the characters act the way they do. To bad we can't see something like that played out in a different situation between Ep. II and III. Like I said above, great piece one of the best Anakin/Padme pieces I've ever seen. I will definitely be looking for more of your work!

Author: Nom Inal
Date posted: 3/17/2005 5:06:53 AM
Nom Inal's Comments:

Bravo! With only this short story, you have accomplished that which Episode II could not - a convincing chronicle of developing love.

Author: BloodRaven
Date posted: 7/6/2005 1:00:54 AM
BloodRaven's Comments:

Oh this was just the sweetest (if not sad because of the forshadowing) tale ever! I truly enjoyed this thank you so much for sharing!

Author: me
Date posted: 8/12/2009 8:38:03 PM
me's Comments:

wow...i liked it. it almost made me cry. that never happens. i thought it was very sweet.

Author: WolfKing93  (signed)
Date posted: 7/15/2012 10:00:08 AM
WolfKing93's Comments:

I liked this very much. I might have cried had this been a scene in the movie - and I say this as a guy who, as a rule, does not cry during movies. Good job on this one. You humanized them both.