Author: Mcily Nochi
Date posted: 8/11/2003 3:25:37 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:
This is a lovely little vignette. Beautifully written, with good insights into Leia's mind that night. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Author: Lady Moonbeam
Date posted: 8/11/2003 8:44:22 PM
Lady Moonbeam's Comments:
This is a very enjoyable and sad piece--but it ended with hope, and I'm glad. I really liked Leia's musings on how she built her mother from fragments of what she heard about her. A very realistic portrayal. Thank you for this lovely vignette.
Date posted: 8/12/2003 6:28:23 AM
I loved this when I beta-ed it, and I love it now! Congratulations on getting it accepted!
Author: Tom Fitzgerald
Date posted: 8/12/2003 1:57:21 PM
Tom Fitzgerald's Comments:
This made me sad, very touching.
Date posted: 8/13/2003 9:06:18 AM
beautiful story. sad and touching. i truly enjoyed this piece.
Date posted: 8/17/2003 6:06:36 PM
This is a well-written piece. I like the time you chose to place Leia--right after they arrive on Yavin IV, waiting for the Death Star to arrive, and for almost certain death. It was frought with emotion; I love that! I do question her memories of her father, though. I always thought Obi-Wan mutilated him in a duel before Anakin had a chance to be a father to her. In ROTJ, Leia recalls her mother, but not her father. Here, that seems to be reversed. Is there a reason for that?
Date posted: 8/19/2003 6:29:23 AM
I knew you could get this story archived from the time I beta-read it for you. Well done!
Date posted: 8/27/2003 9:48:56 AM
When she said father, I think she was referring to Organa.
Well done. I love the emotion. You made Leia seem like a very real, very strong person.
Date posted: 6/27/2004 6:08:46 PM
This is a Very Powerful and Emotional story i've ever read, Very,Very Good.