Date posted: 10/21/2003 2:32:56 AM
A quick big, heart-felt thank you to my betas. :)
Author: Andrea Jade
Date posted: 10/21/2003 7:45:52 AM
Andrea Jade's Comments:
A fabulous story. Great imagination and sensitivity.
Author: Obi-Wan Kenobi83
Date posted: 10/21/2003 10:52:34 AM
Obi-Wan Kenobi83's Comments:
I have read many of your stories obaona, and some of them are among my favorite. You are a very gifted writer who seems to have a very good grasp of the feelings behind the characters in the star wars universe, especially Obi-Wan. This story is another example of that gift you have. Excellent work!! This story almost makes you wish things turned out the way you wrote this AU. Keep writing...
Date posted: 10/22/2003 5:32:35 AM
I love this fanfic, please keep writing!!!
Date posted: 10/22/2003 10:52:27 AM
This is a beautiful story, obaona. You have a lovely writing style. I liked it from the very first paragraph. :)
Date posted: 10/22/2003 12:03:48 PM
Whoof! Powerful, and plausible. All it takes is a choice on Anakin's part, to honor Padme rather than avenge her, and... wow.
Date posted: 10/22/2003 5:25:36 PM
Oba dear, you already know how much I love this, so I won't ramble on too much.
This vig is so beautiful, so...otherworldly, and the points you raised were very thought-provoking. What if Anakin hadn't turned? I loved the perspective you took, and the last line about her whispering in his ear is so bittersweet.
Wonderful job! :)
Date posted: 10/23/2003 6:43:26 PM
not bad wish it was longer though
Date posted: 10/23/2003 10:49:49 PM
I really enjoyed reading that i have just recently gotten into the star wars trilogys and i love them they are great and amoung my favorite movies i really enjoyed reading the what if.
Author: Darth Decidious
Date posted: 10/24/2003 7:43:32 AM
Darth Decidious's Comments:
Very good job. I have really enjoyed 3 fan fic I have ead and this is one of them. Keep up the good work.
Author: Lady Padme
Date posted: 10/26/2003 6:49:08 PM
Lady Padme's Comments:
Lovely, and poignant, dearest!
Author: Master Am_Aral
Date posted: 10/27/2003 1:15:12 AM
Master Am_Aral's Comments:
OK, very emotive, but silly, all we are SW fans just because we hated Vader and the Emperor as much a we loved the rebellion...With that point of view there are no Star Wars at all...
Anyway, your use of the language is cool, and you manged to create some beautyful images...
Date posted: 10/27/2003 5:36:07 PM
Oh, Oba. That was so poignant... and sweet...
Date posted: 10/31/2003 11:47:08 AM
OBOANA!!! email me girl! i wanna read some of ur fix! its been a while! i want first dibs on ur superb, exquisite works!!
btw, loooove this!
Date posted: 11/1/2003 10:41:13 AM
I have read one other of your fics, and I have to say that you have a true gift for writing, one I wish I had. I want you to never give up that gift, to always use it, whenever you can. You write this story so poignantly that even the meanest person would feel.
Date posted: 11/5/2003 12:28:33 PM
really good ff oboana, i like the way the title reflects the writing.
Author: Jedi Knight Quia Lor
Date posted: 11/9/2003 3:56:29 PM
Jedi Knight Quia Lor's Comments:
Wow, obanoa. How lovely! That sounds more like the little boy she met on Tatooine. Sweet and sad. Even in its brevity it was wonderful! I love your work! Please keep writing!
May the Force be with you!
Date posted: 11/24/2003 3:40:40 PM
much much much better
your style lends itself so well to anakin here
at first it hought were might go the cliche'd route with this especially in that first paragraph but the idea of doing another's will in spite of your own to the point that it becomes your own is very high-minded and well done. good imagery as well, definatelya sense of where he was, what he was doing. my only real suggestion is to get away from the word "rage" it somehow pulls the writing down when used as a self-descriptive verb. once again, very good
Date posted: 11/24/2003 7:38:14 PM
Date posted: 1/21/2004 10:51:32 AM
WOW! That was wonderful! For Anakin to honor Padmé rather than avenge her, totally unexpected!
MAY THE FORCE BE WITH YOU!
B-) Mariana B-)
Date posted: 3/23/2004 9:07:23 PM
That was so beautiful! It just made me cry! I loved it!
Date posted: 7/17/2004 12:45:18 PM
This is a nice look at how Anakin's attachment to Padmé could possibly have been a good thing... but the sad thing is, it could also cause him much rage when separated from her. I think it's a fine line, but it's nice to see someone portray what might have happened had it gone the other way. Nice work, Oba! :)
Date posted: 11/11/2004 8:19:47 PM
I loved this story!!!!!!! As you can tell I am a very big fan of Anakin, and this did a wonderful job of portraying his... kinder more noble side. I only wish it was longer! I have now read many of your stories, and you are an excellent writer. Keep it up, and may the Force be with you!
Date posted: 6/3/2005 5:20:23 AM
A beautiful tribute to Anakins love for Padme. Although it doesn't coincide with the original story I believe somewhere deep inside him Ani had it in him to honor her memory in this way if he had only listened to his true feelings. But then we wouldn't have had the rest of the trilogy, lol but still I think it's a wonderful addage and it gives light and meaning to Padmes death.
Date posted: 2/8/2006 7:08:27 PM
*sniff* at the beginning of this story, i didnt quite understand what you meant by 'unreality.' i think i do now b/c, even tho all these thoughts and emotions are laid out for me, in black and white, i still cannot understand it. it doesnt seem quite right, just b/c of the way episode three went. but its beautiful, nonetheless.
Author: kristina mora
Date posted: 4/24/2007 11:49:14 AM
kristina mora's Comments:
I can't beleave how amazing sad this story is. thank you for that. the world needs more writers like you. you can not beeave how much this story has touched my life. thanks again.