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Author: Vergere  (signed)
Date posted: 5/29/2001 8:12:03 AM
Vergere's Comments:

wow...that was so well written!

the emotions were captured perfectly, your characterizations were great. good job, angelqueen, no wonder this fic was accepted into the archive!

Author: Clarus
Date posted: 5/31/2001 7:53:03 AM
Clarus's Comments:

Wow. You did a really good job with this, Angel Queen. It's a very lovely story, and I think you did the Anakin/Vader duality very well at the end. Wonderful!

Author: DarkATX
Date posted: 5/31/2001 9:32:08 PM
DarkATX's Comments:

When I first read this touching story, the first thing that occurred to me was that they BOTH were fallen angels.
It's very poignant but it serves as a fitting farewell to a deeply passionate character.

Author: Naboos_Princess  (signed)
Date posted: 6/1/2001 1:25:05 PM
Naboos_Princess's Comments:

This is an awesome story, AngelQueen, good job! The emotions were very powerful, and it really moved me.

Author: Janos
Date posted: 6/11/2001 6:07:03 PM
Janos's Comments:

How sad. :(

Very nicely written.

Author: DowagerKing
Date posted: 6/16/2001 3:55:25 PM
DowagerKing's Comments:

a truly disturbing look at what is to come. very solemn but very well done. the sense of tragedy from recalling the ghosts of the Jedi Council to the "ruins of Theed," all were well done. good job.

Author: JazzyJedi  (signed)
Date posted: 6/17/2001 10:16:14 AM
JazzyJedi's Comments:

Well, I can only add to the kudos this fic has already recieved. Wonderful to see both sides of these characters. I like Qui-Gon helping out the Senator.

Good work, AngelQueen...some yummy goodies from the Crescent city for you!

Author: Padme
Date posted: 6/17/2001 3:43:56 PM
Padme's Comments:

That was beautiful(sniff sniff)
Had a great flashback.

Author: Belle Bayard  (signed)
Date posted: 6/22/2001 4:01:33 AM
Belle Bayard's Comments:

Bravo! Well done, Angel Queen. Truly poignant and believable insight into the completion of Anakin into Vader with Amidala's death. Brought tears to my eyes (at work, no less).

Author: Darth Synsister
Date posted: 6/23/2001 11:01:18 PM
Darth Synsister's Comments:

I liked the Peitt thing and it showed great emotion I cried! Also it wasn't too long for you to get bored... *cough*Burdens*cough* Whew, I need some cough syrup...

Author: will  (signed)
Date posted: 6/26/2001 4:16:04 AM
will's Comments:

To quote the Dark Lord Himself...impressive, most impressive, wonderfully written.

Author: Anaka  (signed)
Date posted: 6/27/2001 2:34:42 PM
Anaka's Comments:

I really liked this fan fic. I would recommend this to all Star Wars Prequel fans.

Author: the main man
Date posted: 6/29/2001 2:34:32 PM
the main man's Comments:

I loved this story. It made me think of what I would feel like if my own wife died. It really moved me. You are very good at conveying emotions, you might want to try your hand at what Vader felt when Luke was being struck by the Emperor's Lightning and what made him make that final decison.

Author: jedi_jp_trekfan
Date posted: 6/30/2001 8:28:13 AM
jedi_jp_trekfan's Comments:

good moving , i have thpought what it would be to write a fic from ani's point of of voiew

Author: Corran Horn
Date posted: 7/1/2001 11:24:03 PM
Corran Horn's Comments:

that was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author: Kalor_Voe
Date posted: 7/9/2001 11:10:29 PM
Kalor_Voe's Comments:

Loved it! Especially the bit about the twins being Vader's last hope. That could even have been explored more- that it was the union of Amidala and Anakin that brought down the emperor.

Author: maidenjedi  (signed)
Date posted: 7/16/2001 2:59:29 PM
maidenjedi's Comments:

Very well written....this is the first fanfic I've read that handles Vader with such care, keeping his duality as Anakin in mind throughout. My hat is off to you, Angel Queen.

Author: Knightflyer
Date posted: 7/21/2001 3:45:02 PM
Knightflyer's Comments:

Very well written. The emotions were displayed very well throughout the entire story. I also think you should write another story similar to this about how Darth Vader felt when Luke was being struck by the Force lightning. Very well done!!!

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 7/29/2001 6:11:18 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

Ooh, creepy! I feel like I know exactly what will come next. Very cool.

Author: Lady Kenobi
Date posted: 8/9/2001 5:27:07 PM
Lady Kenobi's Comments:

wow! This is great AngelQueen.
I was just fooling around when I saw this
and couldn't belive that I've never read it before.
Truly a wonderful piece. It was so dark,
yet so sweet. The emotion you conveyed was amazing.
I would reccomend this to anyone, but with the warning
read with a box of tissues. :)

Author: jarjarrules  (signed)
Date posted: 8/21/2001 10:58:53 PM
jarjarrules's Comments:

Fantastic, Unfortunately I fear Lucas will gloss over these emotional points in Ep 3. I would love to see Anakin grieve over the loss of himself like in this story.

Author: KC-Wan Kenobi
Date posted: 9/8/2001 9:58:13 AM
KC-Wan Kenobi's Comments:


Very well written, and I like that way Ani is just totally gone after Padme dies. The emotion is shown when Vader won't even recognize that he's Skywalker.

Author: H
Date posted: 9/25/2001 12:18:41 PM
H's Comments:

What a heart-rendering tale... One of the very few that actually made me cry. I especially loved the line about the twins being Anakin's last hope. A well-writen, fine prose that can leave no reader indifferent.

Author: Padme
Date posted: 9/28/2001 3:05:46 PM
Padme's Comments:

Very sad :( But very very nice story!

Author: KenobisGirl
Date posted: 10/14/2001 4:18:57 PM
KenobisGirl's Comments:

Whoa! Great story, but so sad! Nice job!!!!

Author: DarthSteph
Date posted: 12/25/2001 7:52:28 PM
DarthSteph's Comments:

I thought this was well written and I could definitely imagine these events happening in Vader's life. It illustrates the little bit of good that he still has inside of him and also seems to indicate that Amidala always loved him even after he turned to the dark side because she realized that eventually he could be redeemed because he still had good in him. This story was sweet and sad.

Author: Lisa
Date posted: 12/31/2001 8:41:44 PM
Lisa's Comments:

Wow! That was breathtaking! The feeling in it was so real and now I have tears welling out of my eyes. Excellent job!!

Author: JarheadJedi
Date posted: 2/23/2002 9:36:41 AM
JarheadJedi's Comments:

Well written! Now bring on the battle between Obi Wan and Anakin!

Author: Darth Foutzious
Date posted: 2/25/2002 4:45:15 PM
Darth Foutzious's Comments:

Awesome. I don't like Anakin or Padme that much, but this story is VERY good. Nice release of emotions.

Author: Vader, Lord Of The Sith
Date posted: 3/13/2002 10:59:00 AM
Vader, Lord Of The Sith's Comments:

this story truly opened my eyes to what is going to happen: EVERYONE will die. everyone but yoda and vader and kenobi and palpatine is going to die. anakin, padme, these characters are being well developed and then Lucas is just going to kill them off. A well written, disturbing story.

Author: Y-Wing Ace  (signed)
Date posted: 4/25/2002 12:19:38 PM
Y-Wing Ace's Comments:

Beautiful, sad story with some great lines.
"Across the galaxy, on two completely different worlds, two small children begin to scream."
That one gave me chills.

Author: Long
Date posted: 5/26/2002 10:05:36 PM
Long's Comments:

it made me cried ;_;

Author: Shina
Date posted: 6/9/2002 9:14:50 PM
Shina's Comments:

That was beautiful. It almost made me cry. Almost, but not quite. Came extremely close though. *ahem* You are an exelent writer.

Author: Jedi_Kara  (signed)
Date posted: 6/26/2002 4:07:01 PM
Jedi_Kara's Comments:

I loved this story. It's beautifully written. It's the second story that made me cry today. I recomend this story.

Author: UrbanJedi  (signed)
Date posted: 7/12/2002 3:46:07 AM
UrbanJedi's Comments:

Very well written story. I'm very curious to see how GL will handle this part of the story in Ep 3. We know everyone is going to die. Part of my morbid curiosity wants to see it, part of me just hopes it's implied. Hopefully it will be handled as artistically as this. Good story!

Author: Leia
Date posted: 7/15/2002 10:52:02 AM
Leia's Comments:

Angel Queen, that was sooo terrific! Awesome! It was so moving. You have alot of talent-- keep up the great work! I loved it.

Author: vader-incarnate  (signed)
Date posted: 8/2/2002 2:10:16 AM
vader-incarnate's Comments:

Whoa... why'd you do it, Ani?! WHY?!!! WAAAA! One question, totally stupid, totally irrelevant, totally breaking the mood: can Vader cry? Just wondering...

Author: Jedi_Michele
Date posted: 8/12/2002 8:06:32 PM
Jedi_Michele's Comments:

that was a wonderful story and i truly enjoyed it!
tears started to form in my eyes. i really enjoyed this piece. i liekd how she said she saw the other jedi's. great job.

Author: Ani'sFallenAngel
Date posted: 8/21/2002 2:34:15 PM
Ani'sFallenAngel's Comments:

wow...this was really good i made my friend read it i cried she cried too this was the best fanfic she ever read. she never cries over the internet. good job! nice drama

Author: jedi kevin
Date posted: 9/18/2002 11:49:25 AM
jedi kevin's Comments:

i loved this story

Author: max
Date posted: 9/19/2002 10:08:38 AM
max's Comments:

just about every fanfiction I've read is awesome!
But you are wasting your talents, write a book or something! Make some money off this stuff! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author: JediWatcher419
Date posted: 11/29/2002 9:11:07 PM
JediWatcher419's Comments:

I've read this story at least 5 times and it has not yet failed to bring a tear to my eye and a tightness in my throat.

Author: jedi_anakin_lover  (signed)
Date posted: 2/28/2003 3:49:41 PM
jedi_anakin_lover's Comments:

Wow...I have tears in my eyes. And I love how you switch between Anakin and Padme. This is wonderful.

Author: Tanara
Date posted: 3/10/2003 11:12:33 PM
Tanara's Comments:

Ok, I've read wonderful angst before, but this was... wow, dude! The title realy caught my attention, and the picture of Anakin holding Padme, but what really hit me was the line, when Padme died, "Across the galaxy, on two completely different worlds, two small children begin to scream".
It hints at their Force-bond to their mother, which you never see in the movie. MR. LUCAS: Pay attention to this writer! THIS IS HOW EP. THREE NEEDS TO BE, BAH HA!!!!
Oooooh, talent I want. Wah. Hmph. *sigh* Aaaaannngggsssttt.... wonderful story!

Author: Calen
Date posted: 3/26/2003 3:36:03 AM
Calen's Comments:

Too damn sad. Yeah go kill that damn Obi-Wan! It's all his fault.

Author: sashask8ter
Date posted: 4/20/2003 8:44:39 AM
sashask8ter's Comments:

*sob* You really captured the sadness of the moment really well. Every time i read this, i cry.
This is one of my favorite fan-fics. You are so good, you should wite more!!! ( im crying right now, so beautifly writen *sob* *sob* ) i also love the trans. beetween charecters

Author: Darth_Wylie  (signed)
Date posted: 5/13/2003 6:22:00 PM
Darth_Wylie's Comments:

Extremely excellent. One of the best stories I've read so far.

Author: Tavae Themisal  (signed)
Date posted: 10/15/2003 1:24:00 PM
Tavae Themisal's Comments:

All things die. This is an excellent way to show that. Sometimes it niggles at the back of my mind that Anikin could never truly die unless the connections to his past were all gone or on the verge of doing so, her death would do well to push him over the edge thoough. Kudos

Author: Jedi_Trevor_Guldan  (signed)
Date posted: 12/22/2003 12:57:55 PM
Jedi_Trevor_Guldan's Comments:

Oh, my goodness. What a great story! Really puts home how much Ani & Padme meant to each other. Great read!

Author: I Am Mara
Date posted: 4/25/2004 12:02:13 PM
I Am Mara's Comments:

WOW, that is so good I really really loved it. Ever since I saw Episode 2 I have ayways felt some sort of sadness & compassion tward Anakin. Now thoes feelings are just five times stronger & I really really hope that, that is how it is in the movie. I feel that it is really well written & I can truley can feel his emmotion.

Author: I am Mara
Date posted: 4/25/2004 12:26:16 PM
I am Mara's Comments:

I am crying as I was reading this. actually i am still crying *wiping a tear*I totally loved it. I felt sadness for Anakin since AOTC. *sob* I can totally feel his pain & suffering. * Wiping a nother tear* I think the part that totally hit me was the line about the two small children (Luke & Leia) were his only hope & that they started to scream "across the galaxy on two compleetey different worlds two small children started to scream." I feel the twins because of the connection to bolth sets of parents, because of bolth the loss of Padme & the greif in their fathers heart. * sob*

Author: farwars
Date posted: 8/17/2006 10:40:00 AM
farwars's Comments:

i don`t know how you did that "agel qween"but is realy nice story.I like it very much is very lovely and sad story.

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