Date posted: 7/6/2004 10:55:40 AM
it was very cute! I liked the way it got into Anaikan's feelings. You really hit it right on the dot. The only thing i didn't like is it wasn't long enough. Loved it though!
Date posted: 7/6/2004 9:06:35 PM
Very nice! I agree that it is very short but still a good story. You captured the moment quite nicely.
Date posted: 7/6/2004 10:00:01 PM
I just wanna give a big huge thanks to my beta readers for your input on my story and to GaylenKenobi for her excellent cover art.
Thanks again guys!!
Date posted: 7/7/2004 11:15:56 AM
good story. obviously its difficult to write a great story in only 5 or 6 paragraphs, but i like the way you incorperate the lift scene in it. good job
Date posted: 7/8/2004 2:15:07 PM
It was awesome to see this fic on The Force.net! I was one of the first people with the privilege of reading it months ago. Great job and congrats!
Date posted: 7/8/2004 7:16:08 PM
I beta read this short a few months back and I'm so happy to see it archived! Congratulations!
Date posted: 7/9/2004 2:24:03 PM
Very interesting on the insight. I really enjoyed the crispness of the feelings. Great story!
Date posted: 7/20/2004 7:35:44 PM
Very cute, and the bit of Obi Wan at the end was adorable. It may have been short, but it was enough. Good job!
Author: network blackjack
Date posted: 5/7/2005 2:52:13 PM
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