Date posted: 11/22/2004 8:20:28 PM
Just wanted to say congratulations on being the first Poem in the Archive. Hope everyone enjoys it.
Date posted: 11/23/2004 1:30:02 AM
This was wonderful and heartfelt, with so many...I hate to say precious moments, but it's the phrase that comes to mind. Congrats as well on the distinction of the first poem being archived.
Author: Thrawn McEwok
Date posted: 11/23/2004 3:00:12 AM
Thrawn McEwok's Comments:
Powerful, profound, and simply perfect...
Date posted: 11/23/2004 3:49:05 AM
Your poetry just seems to become, better and better, Tahi. "The Eternal Cord" is beautiful and profound at the same time.
Author: Oobee Doob
Date posted: 11/23/2004 6:51:44 AM
Oobee Doob's Comments:
ummm...........Anakin's eyes were blue. :-/
Date posted: 11/23/2004 7:11:00 AM
That was so beautiful. I love the progression of Leia's thoughts through Anakin's life, how she went from his birth to his death, and the realization that he will always be a part of her.
Date posted: 11/23/2004 10:26:46 AM
I enjoyed the poem very much and congrats on being the first one to have a poem archived. :)
Date posted: 11/24/2004 9:34:14 PM
This poem was very beautiful....
Date posted: 11/30/2004 9:38:54 AM
What a beautiful poem! I love the progression of Leia's memories of Anakin, from a baby to a young man. Congrats on being the first poem archived, Tahi. :)
Date posted: 12/5/2004 2:49:35 PM
Excellently done. I nearly cried.
Author: Jedi Knight Safira Felan
Date posted: 12/14/2004 9:47:35 AM
Jedi Knight Safira Felan's Comments:
Very good! Sad but sweet. Except that Anakin's eyes are supposed to be blue...that kinda bugged me a little...but I'm anal that way. Good poem. Very emotional.
Date posted: 12/16/2004 3:17:41 PM
Thankyou so much for the feedback - and thanks also to all those who have taken time to read the poem. Much appreciated.
Just a wee comment regarding the eye colour. Babies eyes - as you know - often change colour a few weeks after the baby is born. My kids all started with blue eyes which then changed to brown. Anakin, however, had eyes that began as brown, and then they changed to that beautiful ice blue colour.
Date posted: 1/14/2005 8:07:36 PM
That was totally beautiful, Tahi. I absolutely loved it. So sad, and yet so beautiful.
Date posted: 3/26/2005 5:43:58 PM
That was beautiful, the greatest poem I've ever read.
The cover art was really awesome too. As soon as I saw it & what the story is about, I cried. I'm such a sap =)
Author: lady jade
Date posted: 7/23/2005 4:26:50 AM
lady jade's Comments:
omg im new to this,so if someone can help me?i actually did cry!cause i liked anakin
Date posted: 2/6/2006 1:46:12 PM
thats so lovely and any one who doesnt agree has the compassion of a rock
Author: Padme Casperia Skywalker
Date posted: 12/31/2007 10:37:22 AM
Padme Casperia Skywalker's Comments:
Wonderful job! That was a very compassionate poem. It made me think of how hard Anakin's death had been Leia and how she managed to accept it.