Date posted: 5/6/2007 10:13:29 PM
beautiful. Perfectly in character. fleshed out the scene in a way I am SURE, in that wonderous way we know our characters like ourselves, that the film would have gone...
Date posted: 6/1/2007 4:22:27 AM
Thanks to the editors for archiving this story. A big thanks to by betas, especially Gina and fialleril.
A special thank you to cover artist fialleril to whom credit should actually go to. I've written to the editors about the mistake and I hope it'll be corrected.
Date posted: 6/17/2007 9:22:23 PM
Hey great story I was just wondering though is there a prequel? Because you kept talking about Beru's nightmare but didn't explain it. If there is a prequel I'd love to read it, if not you might think about exploring the nightmare in a sequel. Just a thought. All in all VERY good.
Date posted: 7/4/2007 1:10:22 AM
This is a beautifully wrought story.
You make Beru very real, and flesh in bits of the hard life of people scratching out a subsistence from a difficult world. You also do better than the movie in your intimations of the scary place that Amakin is in because of the death of his mother.