Author: Rogue 8
Date posted: 3/25/2002 10:48:55 PM
Rogue 8's Comments:

I love it! I feel that way when everything goes wrong. I look forward to writing a review on this

Author: ObiWanGirl
Date posted: 3/26/2002 4:28:01 PM
ObiWanGirl's Comments:

I love POV's with Ben staring!!! This just makes up for the lack of him in the Original Trilogy. And It also give's you the feel of his pain after Episode 3.
Make More!!!1

Author: Solon
Date posted: 3/26/2002 7:42:19 PM
Solon's Comments:

A Well writen story, I really enjoyed it

Author: Kenya Starflight  (signed)
Date posted: 3/28/2002 9:23:40 PM
Kenya Starflight's Comments:

I had a chance to beta-read this story and didn't. It's powerful! I normally don't read Obi fics, but I'm glad that I took a look at this one. How wonderfully moving.

Author: Ben_Max  (signed)
Date posted: 4/28/2002 5:22:05 PM
Ben_Max's Comments:

Thanks to the people that read my story. I thought I'd answer a question that I've been asked several times. No, I didn't get the title of my story from the song by Godsmack. The inspiration behind this story was the commercial about Obi-Wan when TPM came out. The one with the haunting music and voice over that said, "In a time of change, a young man holds in his hands the fire of a dying age. To take the step from student to master, he must trust himself to stand alone."

This story was a long time in the making. It was a while before I decided to sit down and actually write this one. I've written a lot now, so I'm sure you'll be seeing more of my stories up as time goes.

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 5/4/2002 10:28:14 AM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

Good job. An intriguing look at Obi-Wan and his thoughts. Those years must have been incredibly trying for him.

Author: unknown jedi knight  (signed)
Date posted: 5/10/2002 6:02:58 PM
unknown jedi knight's Comments:

This was a great story.It had lots of detail in the story.It was good how the author told about how Luke looked at Leia and she stopped criyeing because she new why he looked at her.I highly recomend this story to be published for real.

Author: Nightmare_anarchy
Date posted: 5/23/2002 9:37:05 PM
Nightmare_anarchy's Comments:

I think there is no much to say ....this is just way too awesome and it has inspired me to launch myself into this starwars novel world....the way the words and articulation the autor uses discribes the formidable sense of pain and guilt that haunts kenobi, but aslo contrasts against his fierce hopes that the cildren will one day be the salvation of the universe..he stands alone...for now

Author: Viari Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 6/6/2002 9:47:38 AM
Viari Skywalker's Comments:

Wow. What else can I say? That was an awesome story! I think you totally captured the pain that Obi-Wan must have gone through. I also loved how you made Leia just as important a presence as Luke. And Padme's line, "If Anakin could help create something this perfect, then there had to be some good left in him." That was a GREAT line!
It shows that Padme still loved Anakin and believed that he could be saved. An awesome fic! Well done!

Author: Stephanie
Date posted: 6/13/2002 9:36:06 PM
Stephanie's Comments:

THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!!! I could actually imagine this is how Obi Wan would have felt and said after Anakin's Fall.

Author: BobaFett688
Date posted: 8/3/2002 11:37:03 AM
BobaFett688's Comments:

One word: EXCELLENT.

That was a great POV, I could really imagine everything you described. An excellent story indeed.

Author: Tony-Wan
Date posted: 8/29/2002 2:48:16 PM
Tony-Wan's Comments:

This story was excellent! It was simple and strong especially at the end when Obi-wan said "I Stand Alone" which meant that he had nobody with him (obviously) and looks back when Anakin turned to the Dark side of the force which is a memory burned into his forehead He was probably thinking that he should have trained Anakin a lot better which is the whole purpose of this story

Author: Sully Erna's Princess
Date posted: 4/12/2003 9:13:01 AM
Sully Erna's Princess's Comments:

I thought it was great how you used this particular POV. I always wonder what's going on in another character's head while the focus is on another. Great! ;)
PS- I Stand Alone is a great song, even if you didn't get it from that. :) It attracted my attention!

Author: Sully Erna's Princess
Date posted: 4/12/2003 9:13:03 AM
Sully Erna's Princess's Comments:

I thought it was great how you used this particular POV. I always wonder what's going on in another character's head while the focus is on another. Great! ;)
PS- I Stand Alone is a great song, even if you didn't get it from that. :) It attracted my attention!

Author: Jedi Knight Quia Lor
Date posted: 11/10/2003 4:35:08 AM
Jedi Knight Quia Lor's Comments:

Wow! I haven't read many Obi-Wan/Ben stories but I think this one tops any and all that I read! The portrayal of his grief and lingering sense of hope is very moving. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!
May the Force be with you,
Jedi Knight Quia Lor

Author: Shadow Jedi 1
Date posted: 3/14/2004 10:07:29 PM
Shadow Jedi 1's Comments:

This was a very good story. It shows the hope that Obi-Wan had in Luke and Leia and their ability to bring about the end of the Empire.

Author: BooGrl
Date posted: 3/5/2005 6:27:09 PM
BooGrl's Comments:

This fanfic was awesome! I loved how you showed Ben's faith in the twins and his guilt for every thing that happened. Wow. I am truly amazed.

Author: Writernoob12
Date posted: 7/2/2008 12:50:15 PM
Writernoob12's Comments:

I liked this, it had a good theme I thought, it was moving even. Short paragraph's and dialogue helped keep everything clear and understandable. Nice job.

Author: Writernoob12
Date posted: 7/2/2008 12:52:04 PM
Writernoob12's Comments:

Oh yeah, I think that using italics around the thoughts at the end would have given them more. . . weight.

Author: Roya
Date posted: 4/2/2012 3:51:31 PM
Roya's Comments:

New Trail Update: There is one more brand new trail to let everyone know. It is aonehtr extension to the glades. Cross mile sweep on to kicking butt and follow to the steel pipe. Pedal up a little bit to the end of the pipe. You will see the pink tape markers. This is Switchback. It is mellow in the beginning ,but progressively gets steeper and has many switchbacks. This trail is also and EXPERT LEVEL TRAIL it gets quite steep also. This was just completed last sunday. 9-25-11